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Welcome Damara Allen to the Mixed-Up Files !

A great big WELCOME to Damara Allen. Damara lives with her supportive husband, daughter, four cats, and a dog. She enjoys horror movies Halloween, crafting, and travel, and her debut novel was just released. For authors, she also keeps a fantastic list of writing resources on her website. I’ll share the link below.

Congratulations!

 But first, a great big CONGRATULATIONS on her debut release THE SKELETON FLUTE!

The legend of the Pied Piper meets Sal and Gabi Break the Universe with a touch of Coraline in this spooky and suspenseful middle grade adventure about a boy whose wish goes horribly wrong and his fight to reunite with his real family.

I immediately ordered a copy, because who doesn’t love a creepy book, Halloween will be here before you know it, and the reviews! Wow!

 

I wanted to create a creepy twist on an already creepy story. Almost all of my stories have some sort of creepy/horror element to them because I have a lifelong love of horror and all things spooky/creepy. I’m a panster, so I didn’t know exactly where I was going with this story, but something else that was important to me was to see my character, Sam, working through some real-life struggles. Why? Because real kids deal with real problems and they deserve to see themselves represented in books. Not because I think kids want to sit around reading books about awful things happening to other kids, but because I want them to know they’re not alone. I want them to know that even if life is hard sometimes, there’s still hope, even when things don’t work out the way we want them to. That’s the great thing about writing horror for kids – sometimes fictional monsters aren’t just monsters. Sometimes they represent the hard things we have to deal with in life. Seeing a character find the bravery to battle those monsters might be everything to someone who is struggling themselves.

How hard was it to get this book published?

If Even Bill Gates has a Mentor, So ...

I had a very non-traditional path to publication, I think. I started out in the query trenches, sending out hundreds of queries, getting tons of rejections, entering the odd pitch contest and mentorship program just like everyone else. Then, I got accepted to PitchWars in 2021, where I had the opportunity to work with two wonderful mentors who helped me revise and elevate this book to prepare for the agent showcase at the end. I had a number of agent requests during the showcase, but in the end, I signed with my agent who was not participating in the showcase. We went on sub to editors in July of 2022 and received an offer three months later. To say my path wasn’t hard isn’t exactly true, because I went through hundreds of rejections across multiple books, and I know the disappointment of spending years working toward something only to be disappointed. But I also know that there were a lot of opportunities opened for me when I got to work with my amazing mentors and participate in the agent showcase. For most people, the path to publication is hard, and the work doesn’t stop once you have an offer in hand.

What is your current or latest read?

S.A. Harian’s Briardark from www.amazon.com

Waywarden (Briardark Book 2)

I’ve been really into wilderness horror lately, so the last two books I read were S.A. Harian’s Briardark and the sequel Waywarden. Before that, I read Jenny Kiefer’s This Wretched Valley. Amazing books if you’re into stories that make you question whether you should REALLY go into the woods, or just stay home where it’s safe.

Your book is a spooky adaptation of the Pied Piper. I confess to having always been a little creeped out by the original story. Have you considered adapting any other stories?

Kate Greenawayduncan1890/Getty Images Entranced by his flute, the transfixed children of Hamelin followed the Piper out of town (Credit: Kate Greenawayduncan1890/Getty Images)

This is a great question! I have actually written a twisted adaptation of the myth of Persephone and Hades and have also dabbled with the myth of Theseus and the Minotaur. I love taking something that’s familiar and twisting it in a way that’s unexpected, but also layering in those little hints that connect my story to the myth/story and seeing who picks up on them. The thing with adaptations is that you’re kind of free to interpret them how you want and if you do it badly, you can deny everything.

 

Music soothes the savage beast, and in your book, it seems to stir up trouble. Do you think most people turn to music in times of stress?

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Oh, for sure. I know I do. In The Skeleton Flute, Sam discovers that music is the doorway to the “non-ordinary reality.” And while I’m not sure about that personally, I do think music is the doorway to the soul. Not just in times of stress, but in happy times too. A lot of my core memories have soundtracks behind them, if that makes sense. Music always helps me feel good, even when I’m feeling down. There’s just something about belting out the words to a powerful song when you’re all alone in the car that makes everything feel better in the moment.

Do you play an instrument? OR Do you have a favorite playlist you used for this book? If so, will you share it?

TIME for Kids | Violin in the Spotlight

I don’t play an instrument. Well, I guess I should correct that. I played the violin for three awful years in elementary school and never got past the “sounds like a dying cat” stage. Music is not in my blood. But, I love listening to it and singing along (badly) to my favorite songs. While drafting, I listened to a lot of atmospheric instrumental music to get me in the mood, particularly the soundtracks to The Haunting of Hill House and The Haunting of Bly Manor – superbly creepy if you need some mood music

Do you have author friends and if so, how have they helped on your journey to getting published?

Do You Have Enough Friends In Your Life?

I have a couple groups of friends that I connected with over various points in my writing journey. The first was the MGNarwhals – formed via the MGHub on Twitter. We connected back in 2020 while we were all getting ready to submit to a mentorship program. We started a group chat and we’re still going strong after all these years, though we’ve changed platforms a couple times. I owe so much of who I am as a writer to these amazing friends. They’ve been the best support I could have asked for – from helping me brainstorm ideas and book titles, to helping me become better at critiquing, to doing beta reads for me and providing amazing, insightful feedback. I don’t know what I would have done without them! I’m also very close with the group of MG writers who went through the last class of PitchWars together. We still chat and critique and brainstorm new projects, and they’ve been so supportive. It’s been amazing seeing them get agents and book deals as well. It’s nice to have friends at all stages of the process to provide support, information, or a shoulder to lean/cry on. I always recommend to other writers to find their people. It’s one of the best things to come out of my writing journey.

You can keep up with Damara and all her exciting projects here.

STEM Tuesday — Oceans — Writing Tips & Resources

Gateway STEM

Ocean Fever is alive and well in Northcentral Kansas! You read that correctly. Ocean Fever has hit my home in the heartland. The wave of all things ocean-related has swept up the reading life of a family about as far removed from the ocean as one can be in the continental United States. 

It all started with a non-fiction picture book. 

The book was SHARKS, a title in the World of Animals Series. It was a book that showed up one day in our home library. I imagine it came from an elementary classroom cull pile from either my wife’s or my daughter’s classroom or a classroom in the schools where they teach. By whatever means, it arrived in our home and quickly became a staple of my two grandkids’ read-aloud pile when they visited. 

SHARKS has been read at all times of the day to one or both of them. It is a particular favorite as part of the bedtime reading regimen when they spend the night. The two of them, ages 5 and 3, can recite vital information about the sharks presented in the book and often correctly predict which shark is coming with the page-turn. Their favorite shark, by far, is the hammerhead shark.

This interest in sharks led to my wife ordering another browsable nonfiction book, DK’s Smithsonian book, OCEANS! Our Watery World As You’ve Never Seen It Before. What a monumental hit! We read it at almost every visit. The youngest retrieves the book from the basket as his first choice even back when he could barely carry the book across the room. He knows about every page and can tell me about undersea volcanos and how their lava can form islands. We not only know about sharks, but also about deep-sea vessels, coral reefs, currents, tides, and sea birds. All from the comfort of our Kansas home.

I consider this tangible evidence of the magic of books and the power of STEM nonfiction. The spark ignited in a picture book of sharks, grew into a fire of curiosity about all things ocean-related. 

Last December, our family visited the recently opened Sobela Ocean Aquarium at the Kansas City Zoo. It is an excellent facility! Both grandkids were in heaven from the first step inside the building. Their excitement hit a fever pitch at one of the first exhibits. While watching sea turtles, fish, and several species of sharks swim by in the huge tank, a hammerhead shark swam across the glass viewing area mere feet in front of them! Eureka! 

We moved through the facility and they correctly identified jellyfish, sea horses, and manta rays. I could see the light in their eyes flash with recognition of creatures from the OCEANS! book. Thank you, DK!

What lesson did this crusty, old STEM Tuesday contributor learn? From his grandkids, he learned we can share and consume all the writing craft and resource information we want but we should never forget or discount the value of our end user…the readers! 

STEM not only provides a well of knowledge to readers but STEM can light a fire in them to learn more and experience more in their lives. 

Even if that experience is to love sharks and the ocean from their landlocked homes in the middle of the country.

It’s a powerful magic, people!

Mike Hays has worked hard from a young age to be a well-rounded individual. A well-rounded, equal-opportunity sports enthusiast, that is. If they keep a score, he’ll either watch it, play it, or coach it. A molecular microbiologist by day, middle-grade author, sports coach, and general good citizen by night, he blogs about sports/life/training-related topics at www.coachhays.com and writer stuff at www.mikehaysbooks.comTwo of his science essays, The Science of Jurassic Park and Zombie Microbiology 101,  are included in the Putting the Science in Fiction collection from Writer’s Digest Books. He can be found roaming around X under the guise of @coachhays64 and @MikeHays64 on Instagram.

 


The O.O.L.F Files

This month on the Out Of Left Field (O.O.L.F.) Files is all about Oceans. Dive into the links below to explore the depths and maybe even discover something new about life under the sea!

Sobela Ocean Aquarium at the Kansas City Zoo & Aquarium

Scholastic Shop link for OCEANS! Our Watery World As You’ve Never Seen It Before

Science and Nature Books from DK Publishing

National Ocean Service, National Oceanic and Atmospheric Administration

Monterey Bay Aquarium – One of my favorite STEM social media sites to follow!

Artificial Reefs (A nice article explaining artificial reefs with a discussion of the positives and negatives associated with them.)

My 2020 STEM Tuesday Writing Craft & Resources post on Sharks

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Filling the Gaps in Middle Grade

Middle Grade Authors

The middle grade market has been a bit discouraging lately. Perhaps you read about The Middle Grade Slump in a recent Mixed-Up Files post. Well, we’re back to let you know about two gaps in the middle grade market that present an opportunity for authors.

According to agent Kelly Dyksterhouse of the Tobias Agency, “Right now there is a need for middle grade novels that bridge the gaps between age categories.” Dysterhouse identifies two areas where books are needed to help kids transition from one category to the next. 

Early Middle Grade

According to Dyksterhouse, there is a need for “younger middle grade novels for readers who are ready to move on from chapter books but who might find the 40k+ word count that has become so common in middle grade intimidating.” 

Does this sound familiar? It’s reminiscent of an opinion piece that appeared in Publisher’s Weekly about a year ago. Melissa Taylor, founder of the Imagination Soup blog, wrote an article titled “It’s Not Me, It’s You: The Argument for Shorter Middle Grade Books.” 

According to Taylor, “When looking at a book with a lot of pages, children might be intimidated, they might prefer quicker stories, they might be struggling readers, and/or they might have attention issues, among other factors.”

Early middle grade literature might be just what these reluctant readers need. Tara Lazar recently featured PJ Gardner’s post Early Middle Grade Needs You, Says PJ Gardner on her blog. Gardner says that “Early Middle Grade is where we start to lose young readers, and I think that’s directly tied to the limited number of books aimed at them.”

Cover of early MG book

Gardner encourages authors to think creatively about how they can target this early middle grade audience. She says these books should include straightforward stories told in 5,000-10,000 words. For Gardner, there are just two major keys – “create believable characters and craft dynamic plots.” 

Think of popular series like Judy Moody, Dog Man, and Geronimo Stilton. These shorter, more concrete books can form a bridge between chapter books and traditional middle grade novels.

Upper Middle Grade

So, what’s the second gap in today’s middle grade market? Dyksterhouse says we need “upper middle grade novels for readers who are ready to engage with deeper themes, tougher subject matters and more complex stories but are not yet ready for the intensity of YA that has increasingly focused on characters aged 17-18+ and experiences they encounter.”

This may sound familiar. School Library Journal’s Teen Literary Toolbox recently highlighted the same need in a guest post by author and middle school language arts teacher Laurie Morrison. Morrison’s piece is titled “Why We Need More ‘Developmentally Relevant’ Upper MG Romance.” 

Let’s pause for a moment and break down the term “developmentally relevant.” Morrison says she discovered this term when library media specialist Steve Tetreault posted it on social media. She immediately embraced it as an alternative to the term “age appropriate,” which can invoke a connotation of judgment. 

For Morrison, the words “age appropriate” do not “honor the fact that two kids who are the same age will have completely different life experiences, perspectives, and comfort levels with different kinds of content, and it raises the question of who, exactly, gets to decide what’s appropriate.” So, what kinds of “developmentally relevant” books are we talking about? 

Upper middle grade books target readers ages 10-14 whose interests have grown beyond the literature written for 8-to-12-year-olds but who aren’t quite ready for the culture and content of YA. Morrison says that kids in this range are hungry for books that are relevant to them.

Leslie Zampetti, literary agent and owner of Open Book Literary agrees. She reflects on her years as a librarian, when she met younger readers who sought genres similar to what their older siblings were reading. However, they wanted stories that were relevant to their experiences and situations. 

“Conventional wisdom is that young readers prefer to ‘read up,’ focusing on older characters,” Zampetti acknowledges. “But my experience was that it’s more nuanced: often, confident and mature readers want to read up, and publishing tends to focus on those readers. Less confident or sophisticated readers want to read books with characters their own age, facing events and emotions new to them and similar to what they’re experiencing.”

Keeping Pace book cover

Morrison echoes Zampetti. In her classroom, Morrison encounters a number of kids in the 11-14 age range who are eager to read romance novels. While most are not ready for YA literature, they crave romance tropes that are relevant to (and dare I say appropriate for?) their age and experience.

Morrison lists books like Nashae Jones’s Courtesy of Cupid, and Wendy Wan-Long Shang’s Bubble Trouble, as well as her own Keeping Pace, as examples of books that fit this much-needed niche.

Authors may be wondering if the publishing industry is as hungry for these upper-middle grade books as the young readers seem to be. According to Zampetti, yes. She affirms that “editors and agents are definitely looking for ‘developmentally relevant’ books, whether classified as upper middle grade or ‘middle school’ or young YA.”

Good News for Authors

If you’re a middle grade author who’s feeling a bit discouraged these days, take heart. You may want to start brainstorming some ideas for straightforward stories that would fit into the early middle grade category. Or perhaps you want to ponder ways some popular tropes can become relevant to upper middle grade readers.

The good news is that opportunity exists. There are gaps to be filled at both ends of the middle grade spectrum. By addressing the need for books that bridge the transitions into and out of middle grade, we just might be able to engage young readers and reverse the slump.