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STEM Tuesday — Human Body– Writing Tips & Resources

I am in constant awe of the human body. The sheer magnificence of what our bodies do every second of every minute of every day is remarkable.

Recently, neuroscientists at Princeton released a complete neural map of the fruit fly’s miniscule brain. This connectome showed all the connections and cell types in the brain giving insight into processing that can help understand the nuts and bolts of a neurological system. Since the fruit fly brain resembles the basic functionality of a human brain, but on a larger magnitude and complexity, knowing how the system works fundamentally will lead to discoveries toward treating human neurological diseases. 

(Side Note: The one fact that caught my attention in the Princeton research was their measurement of the total length of neuron wiring in the fruit fly brain. Although the size of a grain of sand, the fruit fly brain contains about 300 feet of wiring. That’s the size of an American football field! Mind blown!)

When you think of the human body, Newtonian physics is usually not the first thing that pops into your head. Or second. Or third. It’s probably somewhere in the hundreds or thousands on that list. Despite the tendency to dissociate physics from biology, we will wander down that path today to incorporate Sir Issac’s three laws of motion into this STEM Tuesday Writing Tips and Resources post. Please pardon my creative liberty in interchanging Newton’s physics body with the human body. 

Newton’s Three Laws of Motion

  • A body at rest remains at rest, and a body in motion remains in motion at constant speed and in a straight line unless acted on by an unbalanced force.

A classic example of the first law of motion is to place a heavy steel ball on a flat surface or table. The ball remains static until it is pushed or the surface is titled. It then moves in a straight line until it falls off the table and lands on your big toe. Then it stops.

The first law also applies to the creative life. For the ideas bouncing around our brain’s connectome to exist, we have to make them exist. Just like the way our bodies feel and work better when we move them, i.e. exercise, the creative object needs to be in action. A creator has to apply a force instead of waiting for the heavy steel ball of an idea to move on its own. 

  • One has to write to write. 
  • One has to draw to draw. 

Simple creative physics I believe Newton would approve of.

  • The acceleration of a body depends on the mass of the object and the amount of force applied. 

As creators, we understand the power of creative momentum. When we are in that zone, we are cooking on our projects. The amount of force moves the mass of the object forward. However, when the words come hard and the mass overcomes the level of force we can generate 

The struggle is real. 

What can we do? I often fall back on my training as an athlete/strength coach and throughout my 35+ year research microbiology career and look to the Fail Cycle for guidance. 

  • Try something new or hard and fail. 
  • Step back and do the work to improve. 
  • Attempt the challenge again. 
  • Repeat until the challenge is overcome. 
  • Set a new goal.

The Fail Cycle philosophy provides a plan of attack. It allows for hope when it seems our creative path is blocked. Trying, failing, improving, and trying again is the tilt for our creativity table to get the heavy, steel ball of creativity rolling.

  • Whenever one body exerts a force on another body, the second body exerts an equal and opposite on the first.

Creative people have lives. Lives can, and often do, get in the way of creative work. If we have our heavy, steel ball rolling comfortably along, that second object exerts its opposing force. Life gets in the way. Sometimes we even get in our own way. No matter what the source, something inevitably affects the flow.

What can we do? Go with the flow!

Accept the fact these opposing forces are part of the game. Instead of coming to a halt, look at them as a redirect and redirect your energies accordingly. It’s not the easiest thing to do. 

I fall back on a 1980-ish interview with the great Ray Bradbury that showed him in his office surrounded by desks on three sides, each with a typewriter. He told the interviewer he always has multiple writing projects on each typewriter station. When he ran into a dead end on one project, he rolled his office chair to another typewriter and worked on the next project. He said his mind had been working on the other projects as they sat there, so his creative mind was ready to roll when he rolled to the previously abandoned project.

He redirected his creative energy to adjust to the opposing force. 

When that heavy steel ball falls off the table directly over your big toe, move your foot out of the way and follow where it rolls. 

I think Ray Bradbury and Issac Newton would have hit it off fairly well, don’t you?

Good luck! Keep creating and doing what you do. Now, more than ever, the world needs you and your work!

Thank you for reading!

 

Bokkyu Kim at English Wikipedia, CC BY-SA 3.0 via Wikimedia Commons

Mike Hays has worked hard from a young age to be a well-rounded individual. A well-rounded, equal-opportunity sports enthusiast, that is. If they keep a score, he’ll either watch it, play it, or coach it. A molecular microbiologist by day, middle-grade author, sports coach, and general good citizen by night, he blogs about sports/life/training-related topics at www.coachhays.com and writer stuff at www.mikehaysbooks.comTwo of his science essays, The Science of Jurassic Park and Zombie Microbiology 101,  are included in the Putting the Science in Fiction collection from Writer’s Digest Books. He can be found roaming Bluesky under the guise of @mikehays64.bsky.social and @MikeHays64 on Instagram.

 


The O.O.L.F Files

This month on the Out Of Left Field (O.O.L.F.) Files focus on the human body from the perspective of Newton’s Three Laws of Motion. 

What Are Newton’s Laws of Motion? Newton’s First, Second and Third Laws of Motion? (via ThoughtCo.com)

Mapping an entire (fly) brain: A step toward understanding diseases of the human brain (Princeton News)

Physiopedia: Introduction to Human Biomechanics – External Forces

     The basics of how the human body moves with a correlation to Newton’s 3 Laws of Motion.

Innerbody Anatomy Explorer

It’s a pretty cool site to explore twelve major anatomy systems.

Skeletal System

 


 

 

Telling Immigrant Stories Through Verse Novels

Did you know that novels in verse have super powers?

  • These stories, told in lyrical narratives, are immersive.
  • They appeal to young readers looking for shorter books.
  • The visual qualities of the text on the page often evoke the meaning of the words.
  • Many novels in verse have won literary awards.

Using blank space, line breaks, shapes and inventive forms, authors give readers x-ray vision straight into the hearts and minds of their characters.

Now, more than ever, is a good time to empathize with immigrant characters.

Novels in verse have a super power. Author use of blank space, line breaks, shapes and inventive forms give readers x-ray vision straight into the heart and mind of their characters.

Check out these recent stories about young immigrants who are faced with typical middle school challenges such as crushes, friendship, fitting in, and bullying while trying to belong in a country where they are not always made to feel welcome. The main characters in these novels also face the difficulties (and joys) of living between two cultures. The lens of lyrical language allows readers to understand and empathize with an immigrant character.

Call Me Adnan by Reem Faruqui

Ping pong is Adnan’s passion. After many exciting matches, he and his family go to Florida for his championship where a tragedy occurs. This story portrays how one boy’s loving Pakistani Muslim family deals with grief.

 

 

 

When Clouds Touch Us by Thanhha Lai

In this sequel to the award winning Inside Out and Back Again, Vietnamese-American Ha and her family are moving again – from Texas to Alabama. Ha is determined to make money to help her family out. She shows resilience and humor as she tries to make new friends and is confronted with prejudice.

 

 

 

 

Aniana del Mar Jumps In by Jaminne Mendez

Dominican American Aniana is at home in the water, but her mother, whose brother drowned during a hurricane, forbids her to be a part of the swim team. Ani sneaks off to swim practices, with the help of her dad, until she is prevented by her stiff swollen joints. Mendez’s poems describe Ani’s journey with her chronic illness and the growing understanding of her family.

 

 

 

 

 

I Am Kavi by Thushanthi Ponweera

Kavi worked hard for the scholarship that takes her out of her poverty stricken village and into  a fancy school in the city. It’s 1998 and this young Sri Lankan girl is affected by the country’s Civil War. She’s also at war within herself trying to fit in at her school, decide between right and wrong and discover where she belongs.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Isabel in Bloom by Mae Respico

Moving from the Philippines to California isn’t easy for Isabel. She has to make new friends in a new country and she has to get to know her mother all over again since they have lived separately for years. Her grandmother and her green thumb come to the rescue. The special garden project creates builds a community where she belongs.

 

 

 

 

Kareem in Between by Shifa Saltagi Safadi.

The story of how Kareem, a football-loving Syrian American stuck between two cultures, is riveting and poetic. This boy is desperate to make the team and new friends. When the QB makes a proposition, Kareem has to decide between right and

wrong. His family problems revolve around trying to get his very ill grandfather out of Syria during the 2017 Muslim Ban.

 

 

You also won’t want to miss these award winning novels in verse, written prior to 2023.

Red White and Whole by Rajani La Rocca

Inside Out & Back Again by Thanhhan Lai

Other Words for Home by Jasmine Warga.

 

Jen Kraar grew up chasing lizards in India, making up stories about the residents of the spirit houses in Thailand, and riding retired racehorses in Singapore. Jen explores themes of finding home in the middle grade novels and picture books she writes. As a manager at Pittsburgh’s beloved City of Asylum Bookstore, she builds a diverse collection of books and talks about kid lit with customers young and old.

Author Spotlight: Erin Becker + a GIVEAWAY

In today’s Author Spotlight, Sydney Dunlap chats with debut author Erin Becker about her middle-grade novel, Crushing It, an “enemies-to-first-crushes” story published by Penguin Random House and chosen as a Junior Library Guild Gold Standard Selection. Erin is an author and marketer living in Washington, DC. She grew up in Cedar Rapids, Iowa, studied English and creative writing at UNC-Chapel Hill, and holds her MFA from Vermont College of Fine Arts. When she’s not writing, you can find Erin at the gym or occasionally playing soccer (though not nearly as well as the protagonists of her novel). Learn more and connect with Erin at erinbecker.me.

All About the Book!

On the soccer field, Magic Mel is in her element. She’s ready to lead her team to victory at the city championship in her new role as captain. Off the field, however, is a totally different story. Mel can’t get a handle on her class presentation, her friend group has completely dissolved, and her ex-friend-current-teammate, Tory, is being the worst. The only place she feels like herself is in her text conversations where she shares her secret poetry with BTtoYouPlease.

Tory McNally, on the other hand, is keeping everything together, thank you very much. So what if her mom is more preoccupied with her craft projects and new husband than her, or that she’s down to one IRL friend because of annoying, overly peppy “Magic” Mel? She’s perfectly fine, and even when she maybe isn’t, she’s got NotEmilyD to text with.

As the championships loom closer, everything around Mel and Tory starts to get more and more complicated: the dynamics on the field, the rift between their friend group, and, as they connect anonymously online, maybe even their feelings for each other…

From debut author Erin Becker comes an action-packed but tender novel about first romance, identity, and learning how to be brave when it matters the most.

Scroll down for details about how enter a giveaway to win a signed copy of Crushing It.

Interview with Erin Becker

Sydney: I absolutely loved Crushing It. The characters were so real and so relatable. It’s such an honest, touching story that really hits the mark about what it’s like to be thirteen: the friendship and family struggles, crushes, challenges at school, in sports, so much going on. Can you tell me a little about the inspiration behind it?

Erin: First of all, thank you! I’ve had a lot of adult readers tell me the book really took them back to their middle school years. Sometimes I wonder if I should be thanking them or apologizing, since middle school is such an intense time.

The inspiration for this story actually came from the “Poetry Friday” tradition at Vermont College of Fine Arts, where I got my MFA. Each Friday, someone sends a poetry prompt to an all-school list serv, and the idea is that anyone who wants to can write a poem in five minutes and share it via email. That maybe sounds a little intimidating, but everyone is really supportive. I don’t remember exactly what the prompt was, but one Friday I wrote a poem about a girl who becomes soccer captain of her eighth-grade team. She’s excited to be given the captain’s key, which opens the shed where the team keeps the balls, the cones, and everything else they need for practice.

A friend replied to the poem, saying she felt like there was some potential there for a story. I agreed, and eventually, that girl turned into Mel and the poem turned into this book.

Points of View

Sydney: You do such a great job with narrating Crushing It in two points of view, from Tory’s and Mel’s, after their four-person friend group has been split in half. Their voices are very distinctive. How did you make them each sound so unique? And do you personally relate to one of them more than the other? 

Erin: First, I want to give an answer for the poetry nerds out there. Originally, Crushing It was a novel-in-verse, so everything was written as poems. Mel’s poems were roughly in iambic pentameter and kind of flowed and were easy to read, whereas Tory was more staccato and used a lot of enjambment, cutting off the lines in unexpected places and making her poems a little more difficult to “get into.” So even on a rhythm/meter level, their voices were very different right from the start.

Later, when I rewrote this as a prose novel, I felt like I knew the girls really well, so I was able to translate that difference in their voice into the new structure.

Something that’s helped me as a writer is understanding that voice isn’t just the words on the page, but also what the character notices (or doesn’t notice). For example, Tory is really hard on herself and the people around her when it comes to appearances and being organized. But Mel would be less likely to notice details like that. So the world you’re constructing for each point of view is slightly different, because they experience everything—school, their families, their friend group—in a different way.

Sports Angle

Sydney: You describe the soccer games and practices and the experience of being on the team really authentically. Do you have a sports background? What are your favorite sports now, and what were your favorite sports as a kid? 

Erin: I love sports! I played soccer and ran cross country and track and field growing up. Now, I still play soccer sometimes, but I’m getting more into the non-contact-sports world: yoga, dancing, running, walking.

Because playing sports and being on teams has been such an important part of my life, I was really excited to write a book with a focus on sports. I’ve made some of my best friends on the soccer field, going on runs together, or at the gym. It was fun to celebrate that, and to show all the complexities that emerge on teams: the highs and lows of competition, the friendship drama. And of course, there’s the built-in narrative tension, with the clock ticking down to the championship the entire book.

Other Characters

Sydney: I love the family situations that are included in your book. Do you have a favorite secondary character? Who and why?

Erin: I guess I shouldn’t play favorites, but it’s absolutely Terrance, Tory’s older stepbrother. Every draft I wrote of the book, there was more and more Terrance. I love the unexpectedness of that brother/sister relationship. Tory and Terrance are so different, and they give each other such a hard time, but they become really important to each other as the story progresses. This was totally organic and just emerged as I was writing.

Sydney: Yes, I thought he was very interesting, and I enjoyed reading about their evolving relationship.

Thematic Elements

Sydney: Shifting gears, what do you hope readers take away from this story?

Erin: It’s okay to make mistakes, and it’s okay if things get messy sometimes. You still deserve the love, friendship, and respect of the people around you.

Sydney: Those are such important themes for young readers. 

Process

Sydney: Will you tell us a little about your writing process? Are you a plotter or pantser? Where/when do you prefer to write?

Erin: I usually write in the mornings for a couple of hours before I start my day job. I used to be a pantser, but I am coming around to the idea that plotting makes things a lot easier, at least for me. I need quiet to write, so I usually write at home in my office or at a coworking space, with noise-canceling headphones on. I wish I could live out my romantic fantasies of being that cool girl writing in the corner of a café. But every time I try it, I get totally distracted by the music!

Sydney: Same here. I can only write in total silence.

Influences

Sydney: What are some current books that have influenced you as a kidlit writer?

Erin: K.A. Holt’s Redwood and Ponytail was a big influence on Crushing It. Kwame Alexander’s Crossover and Booked as well. I absolutely love Erin Entrada Kelly and Rebecca Stead’s work. Also, I recently read The Language of Seabirds by Will Taylor, and that book and its absolutely beautiful, atmospheric feel will be staying with me for a long time. I’d love to capture something like that in a book I write one day.

Sydney: What a great list of authors and books. Can you give us some insights into what you’ll be working on next?

Nothing’s official yet, but I am working on something that—although it’s not a sequel to Crushing It—should very much appeal to the same readers!

And the Lightning Round:

Coffee or tea?

Coffee 100%. That’s also part of my morning routine: walking to get a coffee at an adorable café in my neighborhood first thing each day.

Sunrise or sunset?

Sunrise!

Favorite place to travel:

Chile. I lived there for a long time and, in my very biased opinion, there’s no better place in the world for backpacking.

Favorite dessert:

Chocolate chip cookies.

Superpower:

Yes please! 🙂

Favorite music:

My tastes range pretty widely, but lately I’ve been loving Karol G.

Favorite book from childhood:

I was a big reader of fantasy as a kid. But for this interview, it seems appropriate to mention that one of the childhood favorites I return to to this day is From the Mixed-Up Files of Mrs. Basil E. Frankweiler by E.L. Konigsburg. 

I still fantasize about running away to live in a museum like Claudia. There are a lot of them here in DC so who knows, maybe I will someday?

Thanks again, Erin! It was so much fun to learn about you, your writing journey, and your amazing novel! Learn more about Erin on her website and follow her on Twitter and Instagram.

For a chance to win a signed copy of Crushing It, comment on the blog!  (Giveaway ends November 22, 2024 MIDNIGHT EST.) U.S. only, please.