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The Shifting Landscape of Literary Agents

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The Association of American Literary Agents (AALA) has revised its Canon of Ethics, with changes set to take place September 1, 2026.

 

Significant Changes to Note

 

While agents still may not charge a client for editorial work done to prepare a manuscript for submission, other avenues of generating revenue have opened up. As reported by medium.com, agents can now “offer clients paid services, such as marketing, publicity, web design, and, in some circumstances, editorial services, as long as representation is not contingent on purchasing those services.”

 

A significant change to the Canon, while not encouraging agents to act as publishers, allows agents to enter into publishing agreements with clients if consent is given. As rationale for this change, AALA states the following:

 

As self-publishing and hybrid publishing continue to gain popularity and traction, and both indie and mainstream publishers find new ways to collaborate with agents, AALA members are more often being asked to help clients get their work published in non-traditional ways.” 

 

What do these changes mean for authors?

 

Industry expert Jane Friedman discusses catalysts for these changes and concerns she has about their implementation in her July 29 post, “Agent Business Models May Be Shifting: What I Fear Will Happen.”  

 

Friedman acknowledges that the agents are under pressure. The field has exploded in growth, with more people “taking up agenting as a side gig” and many industry professionals taking on agenting roles. As a result, editors are overwhelmed with submissions, and response times are lagging. The shifting landscape has made agenting an often financially unstable endeavor.

 

However, changes to AALA’s Canon of Ethics raise concerns for Friedman, including referral fees, potential conflicts of interest, subtle pressure tactics, and a “power imbalance in the author-agent relationship.” Her detailed article, linked above, is thorough and offers specific advice to authors before they sign any contracts.

 

Interview with Artist and Graphic Novelist Rebecca Mock

Today we shine the Mixed-Up Files spotlight on Rebecca Mock, author and illustrator of the debut middle grade graphic novel Dare You To Dance. Hailed by Publishers Weekly as an “eloquent and movement-filled portrait of ambition and self-discovery,” the book is available now from Random House Children’s Books.

MR: Congratulations on the publication of Dare You to Dance, Rebecca! I danced as a kid and was a dance mom (my daughter, Chloe, studied ballet for eighteen years), so I read your book with great interest.

RM: I’m both honored and impressed! Hopefully to you and Chloe, the ballet details rang true. Or, if they didn’t, I hope it was fun to read anyway.

Dare you to Dance: The Inspiration

MR: Can you tell readers a bit about the book? 

RM: Dare You to Dance is about a summer intensive program in NYC, where we meet Gracie, a talented ballet dancer in her tweens who’s immediately swept into the drama and pressure of serious youth ballet—and has to decide whether to concede that she just doesn’t belong or forge a path for herself! It’s about the love of art as well as many other things. I really hoped to make a fun ensemble cast of characters, all of whom have their own journeys, humor, and fun moments. I pitched the book as “over-the-top!”—I wanted to draw something super high-energy! And what better than ballet?

Friendship Versus Rivalry

MR: Your plucky protagonist, Gracie, is looking for a rival to up her dance game. Sariah, the best dancer in the program, is more interested in friendship than competition. What were you trying to say about the nature of rivalry and friendship, particularly in the dance world? The two are often intertwined.

RM: It’s not only the dance world—I was drawing from my own experiences in painting, drawing, and theater. When it came to art, I made up many rivals—often creating competitions where there were none. I could be intense, like Gracie. I was also in Sariah’s role, to a degree—too caught up in pressuring myself to notice those around me. I also, consistently, found that I respected and appreciated those I felt “competitive” toward, and regarded them as comrades.

I think that mentality was influenced by the action/adventure cartoons and comics I loved. I had an active imagination. What I like about both Gracie and Sariah is though they’re very different, they share that quality of creating pressure and competition where there doesn’t need to be any, perhaps stemming from vivid imaginations. And instead of learning to let that go, they egg each other on and create games to motivate each other. And that works for them, that’s how their friendship works, and hopefully that’s a bit funny, and maybe you can think of a friend who you act the same way with.

Rebecca’s Dance Training

MR: I read that you studied dance as a child. What was your training like? Did you attend an intensive ballet workshop like the one you described in Dare You to Dance?

RM: I took ballet classes from about age three to eleven. I wasn’t dancing seriously—just one or two classes per week. I know young dancers at that age might take three or more classes per week! And truthfully, ballet wasn’t my strength—I was constantly struggling with posture and form! But I kept taking classes for one very important reason: One of my best friends took classes with me. We had so much fun together.

I also took tap and modern classes (I switched to modern and kept taking classes until thirteen, when I stopped dance classes altogether). I truly love to dance, still. Art as a form of expression is something most young people are drawn to, and love, naturally. But sometimes the classroom space can be oppressive, and friends are the main reason you keep coming back.

Dance and Body Image

MR: It’s no secret that dancers’ bodies are often scrutinized, with undue emphasis placed on the desire or necessity to be thin. From your experience and the research you did for the book, have any strides been made in the dance world to accept a range of body types? If not, do you expect the tide to change anytime soon?

RM: Since I haven’t been part of the dance world as a teen or adult, I skipped a lot of this scrutiny and pressure. I can’t speak from the point of view of someone who’s honestly dealt with that, but I can remember friends who had to deal with this scrutiny, and I tried to pay homage to their challenges. I had a friend in school like Sariah who was taller and bigger than most of the other dancers in her class, and admitted that it alienated her and made her feel othered. I remember being shocked. To me she seemed to be such a dancer, so elegant and graceful. How could she not fit in the ballet space?

In my research, I took careful note of how dancers talked about body image, and although I’m only seeing a small sliver of the dance world in videos and interviews, I’m seeing bits of both that old-fashioned body scrutiny and a more revolutionary re-imagining of ballet ideals. When you delve into the foundations and history of ballet which stretches back 500 years, our modern stereotypes about body types, gender roles, and appearances are all trends that emerged fairly recently. Ballet has evolved in many directions over the centuries, and I expect it will continue to do so.

Researching Ballet

MR: Speaking of research, what kind of research did you do for the book? There are a ton of ballet terms to know and positions to draw. It couldn’t have been easy.

RM: I did so much research! I read a few books about ballet, including a ballet textbook and the fantastic nonfiction book Apollo’s Angels: A History of Ballet. I followed dozens of ballet influencers and watched their vlogs, read their posts, used their dance videos as reference for practice drawings. I tried to seek out online ballet tutorials which explained each step of a sequence so that I could write down, and then double-check, each move. I even had a ballet consultant triple-check the book to be sure that even the side-talk and teachers’ attitudes were believable and added to the realism.

But underneath it all, I was remembering how it felt to be in ballet class. The sound of the teacher counting five-six-seven-eight, the chatter of students waiting for their turn at the floor sequence . . . One thing I avoided doing was watching any ballet movies or TV shows for the duration of working on this book. I didn’t want to accidentally transcribe any well-worn movie cliches into the story.

Portrait of an Artist

MR: Switching gears, you are widely known for your work as an illustrator, cartoonist, and book-cover artist. You also collaborated with Hope Larson on the hugely popular middle-grade graphic novels Compass South, Knife’s Edge, and Salt Magic. What prompted your decision to create a graphic novel on your own? Did it feel weird not having a collaborator?

RM: While this book isn’t my first solo story project, it’s definitely the longest! It’s my first time handling a story of this scale in every aspect, which was daunting and exciting in equal measure. Working with Hope taught me so much about comics, and her beautiful scripts always gave me so much room to play.

Once Salt Magic was done, I felt that I was ready to try writing my own long-form graphic novel. I pondered over what kind of story I’d have the most fun both writing and drawing, that would reflect my own sensibilities, which lean toward action, heightened emotion, and slapstick. What I learned in the process, was that I LOVE rewriting things on the fly. As much as the final book stayed more or less true to the initial outline, I altered and refined things at each stage, even adding scenes at the inking stage. Each change made the story truer to its core messages: that friendship transcends competition and that art doesn’t need to be “serious” to be good.

Writing and Illustrating Process

MR: What is your creative process for writing and illustrating a graphic novel? Do you write the text first and add the illustrations or vice-versa? Also, how does being an artist influence your writing?

RM: Having finished Dare You and another book since, I’ve refined and honed my process a lot. When I started Dare You, I only had experience planning out stories fifty pages or less, and that process involved almost no scripting. Now it goes back and forth. I first write an outline, and I refine that until it’s quite detailed, even including much of the dialogue. I break that outline into pages, to get a rough idea of how the book is paced. Then I draw thumbnails of each page, really small. I scan and expand those tiny drawings to be a bit larger, and drop in as much of the placeholder dialogue as I can—and I’ll rewrite a lot of the outline based on new ideas that the thumbnails inspired. These thumbnails-with-text are the first draft of the final script.

From there…

I draw more refined thumbnails and make further changes as I realize my first visual ideas could be better. And the dialogue gets a lot of edits too. Now, this is the final “script.” From here, final sketches and inks and colors can go smoothly, although I’ll still change and refine small things as I get closer to finishing. Sometimes I realize I need to completely redraw the first five pages, because drawing the final scenes gave me a better idea of how to open the story. Sometimes it’s making sure a character is consistently wearing socks. Being an artist allows me to “draw” my script instead of having to describe it. I still like working from other writer’s scripts, but there is a lot of fun to be had in diving into the story at the thumbnail stage and letting each new page feel like venturing into the unknown.

#Goals

MR: Do you have a specific routine or word-count goals? Any rituals? 

RM: I don’t have word count goals as much as page count goals. When I’m doing those tiny little thumbnail drawings, I’ll set a daily goal, maybe four pages or maybe ten. It’s important to find the balance of staying consistent without pushing yourself so that you don’t burn out mentally. I want to feel like I’m not quite finished with a thought when I stop “writing” for the day, so that the next day I’m excited to finish it.

MR: What projects are you working on now, Rebecca?

RM: I’m wrapping up a short comic for a DC anthology of spooky Halloween stories, called Quoth the Raven . . . Whatever. After that I’ll be hopefully working on final sketches/inks of a new book, as well as teaching my storytelling class at FIT’s Illustration master’s program.

Lightning Round!

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MR: Last thing: No MUF interview is complete without a lightning round, so . . .

Preferred writing snack? If I’m in a bind, if I need to really focus or just get out of a slump, my secret weapon is gummy candy. It’s an unhealthy secret weapon ONLY to be used in emergencies!

Coffee or tea? Coffee if I need to draw really complex things! Tea if I want to have a nice, steady day.

Zombie apocalypse: Yea or nay? Nay. I like my brains where they are.

Favorite dance style? I love watching swing dancing and tap dancing!

Favorite dance company? American Ballet Theatre—I used their studios as reference for a lot of details in the book!

Superpower? I love superheroes with electric powers. It would be cool to turn on my TV with a zap.

Favorite place on earth? My parents’ house, sitting by the window, looking out at the trees during a rainstorm.

MR: Thank you for chatting with me, Rebecca—and congratulations on the publication of Dare You to Dance. I thoroughly enjoyed it, and I know MUF readers will, too.

{For more books about dance, check out this list from the Mixed-Up Files archives}

Bio

REBECCA MOCK REBECCA MOCK (they/she) is a New York Times bestselling and Eisner award-winning illustrator and comic artist. They are the author and illustrator of the graphic novel Dare You to Dance. They’ve also illustrated the graphic novels Compass SouthKnife’s Edge, and Salt Magic, written by Hope Larson, and their artwork can be found in newspapers, cartoons, books, commercials, and video games. Rebecca lives in Brooklyn, New York.

 

 

MELISSA ROSKE is a writer of middle-grade fiction. Before spending her days with imaginary people, she interviewed real ones as a journalist in Europe. In London she landed a job as an advice columnist for Just Seventeen magazine. Upon returning to her native New York, Melissa contributed to several books and magazines, selected jokes for Reader’s Digest, and received certification as a life coach from NYU. In addition to her debut novel Kat Greene Comes Clean (Charlesbridge), Melissa’s short story “Grandma Merle’s Last Wish” appears in the Jewish middle-grade anthology, Coming of Age: 13 B’Nai Mitzvah Stories (Albert Whitman). Learn more about Melissa on her Website and follow her on Facebook and Instagram.

STEM Tuesday– Light Pollution– Book List

What Happened to our Starry, Starry Night?

If you go outside on a moonless night, what do you see? A planet, maybe a handful of stars if you’re lucky. Unfortunately, for too many of us the city lights diminish the night sky. Streetlights and other artificial lights do more than illuminate our world. They create problems for plants and animals living in and around our cities, including seasonal migrators.

Book cover - bird and moth perched on three ornate lights lit at night.

Who Hid the Stars? How Light Pollution Changes Our World by Danio Miserocchi & Maciej Michno; illus. by Valentina Gottardi, and translated by Sylvia Notini

This well-documented book examines how city lights affect birds and bats, reptiles and insects – even trees and flowers. It also provides hope, sharing things cities and people can do to minimize light pollution. Back matter includes ideas for bringing back the stars (dark skies) and resources.

Book cover - person sitting on a slope watching te setting sun.

Saving the Night : How Light Pollution is Harming Life on Earth by Stephen Aitken

Full of fascinating photos and facts, this book examines many interactions creatures and plants have developed with light, the differing effects of various sources of light pollution on land and in our waterways, conservationists working to preserve the night, and successful projects. It includes suggestions for reducing our individual light pollution. 

Book cover - glowing frog on a black background.

Dark Matters: Nature’s Reaction to Light Pollution by Joan Marie Galat

A blend of science and memoir that focuses on the environmental consequences of increasingly artificially lit night skies. She describes its impact on sea turtles, fireflies, birds, and bats and provides basic steps to address light pollution.

Book cover - shapes spiral on and above the earth.

The World at Night: Discover the World That Wakes When You Sleep by Ben Lerwill

A browsable book broken into sections including the night sky, oceans, forests, and cities. From penguins to city rats, it explores how animals sleep, how they see at night, and the environmental and health effects of artificial light on animals, including humans.

Book cvoer - parent and child sit staring at the night sky.

In the Dark: The Science of What Happens at Night by Lisa Deresti Betik, illustrated by Josh Holinaty

Combining lightly comic illustrations with amazing graphics and charts, it explores the biological functions of sleep and darkness on people, animals, and plants. Did you know plants do math at night? It also examines issues caused by artificial lights on migrations, animal and plant behaviors, and the science of the night.

Book cover - newly hatched sea turtles heading for the ocean.

Follow the moon home : a tale of one idea, twenty kids, and a hundred sea turtles by Philippe Cousteau and Deborah Hopkinson

Informational fiction inspired by the student-initiated Lights Out for Loggerheads program in South Carolina. The story presents a model for community engagement, and back matter outlines actions appropriate for preteen environmentalists.

Some Hands-On Appreciation Of The Dark:

Book cover - a magnifying glass and birds, racoon, amphibians, and insects and some of their tracts.

The Animal Adventurer’s Guide : How to Prowl For an Owl, Make Snail Slime, and Catch a Frog Bare-Handed, by Susie Spikol  

While not dedicated to night prowling, these animal-focused activities will get kids outside at any time of the year whether light or dark.

Book cover - shadowy figures of adult and child looking at stars in the sky.

Sky Gazing : A Guide to the Moon, Sun, Planets, Stars, Eclipses, Constellations by Meg Thacher.

This was actually a featured book a couple years ago (link) but we wanted to mention it again as a resource for sky-watchers. Each section includes activities that focus on the sky, the moon, the sun, planets, and stars and constellations.


This month’s STEM Tuesday book list was prepared by:

Photo of Sue Heavenrich

Sue Heavenrich is an award-winning author, blogger, and bug-watcher. A long line of ants marching across the kitchen counter inspired her first article for kids. When not writing, she’s either in the garden or tromping through the woods. Her books for middle-grade readers include Funky Fungi: 30 Activities for Exploring Molds, Mushrooms, Lichens, and More and Diet for a Changing Climate. Visit her at www.sueheavenrich.com

Photo of Maria Marshall

Maria is a children’s author, blogger, and poet who is passionate about making nature and reading fun for children. She’s been a judge for the Cybils Awards since 2017, and a judge for the #50PreciousWords competition since its inception. Two of her poems are published in The Best of Today’s Little Ditty 2016 and 2014-2015 anthologies. When not writing, critiquing, or reading, she bird watches, travels the world, bakes, and hikes. Visit her at www.mariacmarshall.com.