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Written in Stone and cross cultural writing

We passed a national milestone recently and one of particular relevance to everyone who writes for children. Our last census demonstrated that more than 50% of kids in this country are children of color, and for children’s writers it’s cause for reflection. Adding to the issue is the fact that well over 90% of children’s writers are white. The writers of adult literature are slightly more reflective of our national landscape but it’s a very white world among the creators of children’s books and a mostly white world for children’s book characters. And for a nation of hungry readers this disconnect will be problematic unless we dramatically increase the number of non-white characters in books from it’s current level of about 10% every year. And how do we accomplish this? The long term solution, of course, is to raise up a generation of young writers of color to write the books they are longing to read. Unfortunately that is a very long term project. In the short term, white writers will have to make at least some of their characters reflect the cultures present in their communities, even if those cultures are not a part of their own families. And inevitably that raises the question–
What right does an author have to write a character outside their own cultural experience?
 
This is a question I’ve grappled with for more than a decade in writing my book which comes to bookstores in the coming week. Written in Stone is set among the Makah and Quinault tribes of the Olympic Peninsula in Washington in the 1920s. Pearl Carver’s story is one of cultural survival. It’s a story about how to continue being a true Makah, a true daughter of whalers when the whales have gone from the ocean.
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So why in a universe of possible stories would I chose to tell this one? The first answer, the one that started me on the journey was simply that my students wanted a story about them. My first teaching job was on the Quinault reservation. My fifth grade class read Julie of the Wolves which in the early 1990s was the best book I could find (and afford) with a Native American main character. My class liked the story but insisted that Julie was nothing like them. The knew that, although they were usually classified as the same race, Alaskan natives have their own culture, language, environment, economy, and mythology, and that it was all very different from theirs. We had a great conversation about what a story about them should include, and one of my students who often summed up things on behalf of the class said rather wistfully, “Well I guess there’s never going to be a book like that unless one of us grows up and writes it.”   That girl, grew up to be a teacher and I (who had planned on being a teacher my whole life) grew up to be an author. And I never forgot how much my students wanted to see somebody like them in a book.
So does that give me a right to write about their culture? Certainly having a personal connection to a culture you are trying to portray matters. If nothing else it makes it much easier to find detailed and authentic information, when you know people who are experts in the particular information you need. Most of what I learned about the cultures I was writing about come from conversations with my neighbors. IMG_0343For example, the grandmother of one of my students spent a week teaching my class traditional basket making techniques. I learned along with them and although I’m not an expert on native basket making, I do know how one Quinault grandma does it. And I know something about how she feels about her baskets and what it meant to my student’s to tap into this centuries old art as taught by a highly respected artist in their own community.
Connection matters. But it is far from the only thing needed. Robust research is also needed, and not just for a character of a different race. When I was working on my recent novel Second Fiddle I had an Estonian Soviet soldier character. Although the man was white, we were different in language, religion, generation, political background, gender, class, and education. I did extensive cultural research including spending time in worship with Lutherans, listening to Estonian music, reading (in translation) Estonian novels, watching documentaries and listening to Soviet officers talk about the Cold War era. If I needed that much research to really understand the perspective, the aspirations and the fears of a supporting character, all the more research was needed to write Pearl’s story in Written in Stone. And I was fortunate to find great sources and a pair of tribes with both an avid interest in their own history and the resources to keep and celebrate their heritage. The Makah have a world class museum in Neah Bay which houses the largest and most complete collection of traditional whaling implements in North America. The collection came from an archaeological site at Ozette, a former village of the Makah and the setting for my story. The Quinaults are avid canoe makers and this summer will celebrate a gathering of indigenous canoe makers from all over the Pacific. When I needed information I had primary sources aplenty.
But in the end I think the research its self was not enough. I didn’t start to really get a feel for my characters inner life until I started to take an interest in my own Irish heritage. Knowing how much my Quinault students loved their own traditional stories I made a point of reading my own children Irish fairytales and playing Irish music. They’ve gone on to become interested in Irish history and two of them have become accomplished Irish dancers. imagesI remember a conversation I had several years ago with an Irish harper. He said that Queen Elizabeth, famous for her patronage of the arts and Shakespeare, had loved Irish music and kept a Celtic harper in her court. But she also hated and feared the Irish and knew how highly they regarded their harper poets. So she sent out an order to burn every harp and hang every harper as a means to crush Irish culture. And it nearly worked. Between active political repression and famine and epidemics, there were less than a dozen living harpers 200 years ago. But the Irish made a concerted effort at last to save their indigenous music, art, dance, and literature, and resist the dominance of British culture. So my children know when they dance the St. Patrick’s Day set or The Blackbird, that they are dancing steps hundreds of years old. They know the steps were not written down for fear of prison or even hanging, but were passed from one dancer to another. It is a one-of-a-kind feeling to perform in public an art form that somebody in your ancestry risked their life and livelihood to save for you. I feel it every time I play one of the traditional jigs or hornpipes on my violin. And once I understood that about my own heritage, I had the insight I needed to understand my character Pearl Carver’s struggle to hold on to her culture in the face of discrimination, economic pressure and a changing environment. Empathy in the end made the biggest difference. 
So don’t think I necessarily have the right to write any story about any culture, but I know for certain that I have the right to tell this one. And perhaps that is the answer. If authors are being honest in their craft, their own connection, research, and personal insight will tell them if the story is theirs to tell.
Written in Stone goes on sale this Tuesday. There’s lots of information about it on my website. I’ve put together a board of related images here on Pinterest. And there are two book giveaways going on right now at Literary Rambles and The Styling Librarian, so stop by there and put your name in the hat if you are interested. And if you get a chance stop by your library and local bookstore and encourage them to carry books with characters that reflect the diversity of cultures your children attend school with every day.

Dan Gutman’s My Weird Writing Tips

If you’re over a certain age, chances are, you’ve picked up a Dan Gutman book.  Whether you love humor – as the devotees of My Weird School can attest – or baseball or just a great story (The Homework Machine, anyone?), Dan Gutman has book for you.  And now, Mr. Gutman has a great book for kids on writing as well called My Weird Writing Tips, and who better to blend humor and writing from a kid-friendly angle?  Mr. Gutman was kind enough to join us on the Files to share his inspiration for his latest book.

Photo credit: Dan Gutman

Photo credit: Dan Gutman

1.      You say on your website that your impetus for writing this book was your astonishment at the grammar and spelling errors you were seeing in kids’ emails to you.  Did you notice a gradual decline, or has this always been a problem?  Was there one particular e-mail that made you say, “That’s it, I’m writing a book on writing for kids!”?

I think it’s always been a problem, and not just with kids.  Adults are just as bad.  You should see these emails and Facebook posts I get.  It’s hard to believe these people ever went to school!  Maybe I’m old fashioned, but I think that communication is important, and people should make at least a minimal effort to write clearly, even in a text or post.

I do remember one email that was horribly written, and when I replied to the kid and told him he should proofread his words before hitting SEND, he informed me that I was an old fuddy-duddy who still cared about such silly things in the age of Twitter, Instagram, and Facebook.  That was part of my motivation for writing “My Weird Writing Tips.”  (Speaking of Twitter and Instagram, you can follow Dan on Twitter or Instagram @dangutmanbooks.)  Gee, I hope I don’t make any spelling errors in this interview.  That would look really bad!

2.      When you were a kid, was there a particular grammar or spelling problem that vexed you? What kind of writer were you as a kid? Do you feel that you are uniquely positioned to help your audience?

No, I don’t remember a particular problem.  I was not a big reader when I was a kid, but for some reason writing always came naturally to me.  To me, it was just like having a conversation with somebody–and I try to do that same thing in my books.  I think that because I was a reluctant reader myself, I relate well to kids like that.  I know what bores them, and what makes them like a story.  My ultimate goal is to create a story that’s so captivating that a kid will look up after two hours and feel like he or she wasn’t even reading.  It was so effortless that it felt like watching a movie in your head.

My Weird Writing Tips

3.      Your book not only imparts basic writing advice, it does so in the form of a My Weird School story.  Did you experiment with various formats before coming to this format, or was that your intention all along?  Did you have a particular type of reader (a reluctant reader, a reader of certain age or mindset) in mind when you wrote this?

I never saw this project as anything but a My Weird School book.  I figure it will be helpful to any kid in grades 2-5.  When I was growing up, I used to read Mad Magazine.  They always came out with these “special” books to supplement the magazine.  This will be the first My Weird School “special.”  After this will be specials about Halloween, Christmas, Easter, Back To School, Valentine’s Day, and more.

4.      Is there a part of the story you’d care to share with our readers?

Yeah, my favorite part is where I show the kids how they can create a story from scratch–when they have no ideas at all.  It’s very simple.  You start with a setting, then you choose a main character to suit that setting.  Then you give that character a goal or problem to solve.  After that, you surround that character with some interesting secondary characters.  Make one of them a “bad guy.”  Think of a mind-blowing opening scene, and you’re off to the races.  I have been doing this at writing workshops in schools for years, and the kids have a lot of fun creating the outline of a story in 30 minutes.

5.      How do you hope this book will be used?  Do you see this as part of a classroom lesson, or is this for kids to pick up on their own?

It’s hard to imagine kids actually picking up a non-fiction books about writing just for the fun of it.  So My Weird Writing Tips will probably be used by teachers and librarians in schools.  But I do know that a lot of kids are passionate My Weird School fans who want to read every book in the series. I’m hoping some of them will be curious about this book and want to see what it’s all about.

6.      It hardly seems right to interview you without remarking on the fact that this year you will be publishing your 109th book.  Your first book, written for adults, was published in 1985.  How have you managed to be so prolific?  What do you think is your most useful writing habit or routine?  

All I can tell you is that I write pretty fast, and I work really hard.  If I can write a chapter of a book in a day, and the book has thirty chapters or less, well, I should be able to finish a rough draft in a month.  Of course, I don’t always write a chapter in a day, and the rough draft is only the beginning.  But you get the idea.  A My Weird School book takes me about a month to finish.  My baseball card adventure books take about six months.  The Genius Files series takes about a year to write each book.

Here’s a little trick I use that people might find useful: Write your first draft and read it out loud.  As you read it, PRETEND YOU ARE SOMEBODY ELSE–a teacher, a librarian, a friend, a stranger.  And as you read your words through somebody else’s eyes, you will see how you can improve it and you’ll spot the mistakes you’ve made.  Try that.  Also, go to my web site (www.dangutman.com) and click TIPS FOR YOUNG AUTHORS.

7.      Since this is a blog featuring middle-grade books, we’d love to know what middle-grade means to you!

Gee, I never really thought about it.  Some kids read at a certain “grade level,” and some read above or below that level.  My Weird School books are written for younger kids than most of my other books, but I’m not very strategic about it.  I just write them, and kids of various ages read them.  When I started that series, my daughter was in second grade and figured kids that age would read the books.  But after they were published, I heard that kids in third, fourth, and fifth grade were enjoying them too.  So I don’t like to label my books for any one particular grade level.  Even some grownups read my books.

Yes, they do, Dan, with great enthusiasm!  And now, dear readers, a chance for you to receive a copy of Dan’s great new book! 

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