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STEM Tuesday — Human Body– Writing Tips & Resources

I am in constant awe of the human body. The sheer magnificence of what our bodies do every second of every minute of every day is remarkable.

Recently, neuroscientists at Princeton released a complete neural map of the fruit fly’s miniscule brain. This connectome showed all the connections and cell types in the brain giving insight into processing that can help understand the nuts and bolts of a neurological system. Since the fruit fly brain resembles the basic functionality of a human brain, but on a larger magnitude and complexity, knowing how the system works fundamentally will lead to discoveries toward treating human neurological diseases. 

(Side Note: The one fact that caught my attention in the Princeton research was their measurement of the total length of neuron wiring in the fruit fly brain. Although the size of a grain of sand, the fruit fly brain contains about 300 feet of wiring. That’s the size of an American football field! Mind blown!)

When you think of the human body, Newtonian physics is usually not the first thing that pops into your head. Or second. Or third. It’s probably somewhere in the hundreds or thousands on that list. Despite the tendency to dissociate physics from biology, we will wander down that path today to incorporate Sir Issac’s three laws of motion into this STEM Tuesday Writing Tips and Resources post. Please pardon my creative liberty in interchanging Newton’s physics body with the human body. 

Newton’s Three Laws of Motion

  • A body at rest remains at rest, and a body in motion remains in motion at constant speed and in a straight line unless acted on by an unbalanced force.

A classic example of the first law of motion is to place a heavy steel ball on a flat surface or table. The ball remains static until it is pushed or the surface is titled. It then moves in a straight line until it falls off the table and lands on your big toe. Then it stops.

The first law also applies to the creative life. For the ideas bouncing around our brain’s connectome to exist, we have to make them exist. Just like the way our bodies feel and work better when we move them, i.e. exercise, the creative object needs to be in action. A creator has to apply a force instead of waiting for the heavy steel ball of an idea to move on its own. 

  • One has to write to write. 
  • One has to draw to draw. 

Simple creative physics I believe Newton would approve of.

  • The acceleration of a body depends on the mass of the object and the amount of force applied. 

As creators, we understand the power of creative momentum. When we are in that zone, we are cooking on our projects. The amount of force moves the mass of the object forward. However, when the words come hard and the mass overcomes the level of force we can generate 

The struggle is real. 

What can we do? I often fall back on my training as an athlete/strength coach and throughout my 35+ year research microbiology career and look to the Fail Cycle for guidance. 

  • Try something new or hard and fail. 
  • Step back and do the work to improve. 
  • Attempt the challenge again. 
  • Repeat until the challenge is overcome. 
  • Set a new goal.

The Fail Cycle philosophy provides a plan of attack. It allows for hope when it seems our creative path is blocked. Trying, failing, improving, and trying again is the tilt for our creativity table to get the heavy, steel ball of creativity rolling.

  • Whenever one body exerts a force on another body, the second body exerts an equal and opposite on the first.

Creative people have lives. Lives can, and often do, get in the way of creative work. If we have our heavy, steel ball rolling comfortably along, that second object exerts its opposing force. Life gets in the way. Sometimes we even get in our own way. No matter what the source, something inevitably affects the flow.

What can we do? Go with the flow!

Accept the fact these opposing forces are part of the game. Instead of coming to a halt, look at them as a redirect and redirect your energies accordingly. It’s not the easiest thing to do. 

I fall back on a 1980-ish interview with the great Ray Bradbury that showed him in his office surrounded by desks on three sides, each with a typewriter. He told the interviewer he always has multiple writing projects on each typewriter station. When he ran into a dead end on one project, he rolled his office chair to another typewriter and worked on the next project. He said his mind had been working on the other projects as they sat there, so his creative mind was ready to roll when he rolled to the previously abandoned project.

He redirected his creative energy to adjust to the opposing force. 

When that heavy steel ball falls off the table directly over your big toe, move your foot out of the way and follow where it rolls. 

I think Ray Bradbury and Issac Newton would have hit it off fairly well, don’t you?

Good luck! Keep creating and doing what you do. Now, more than ever, the world needs you and your work!

Thank you for reading!

 

Bokkyu Kim at English Wikipedia, CC BY-SA 3.0 via Wikimedia Commons

Mike Hays has worked hard from a young age to be a well-rounded individual. A well-rounded, equal-opportunity sports enthusiast, that is. If they keep a score, he’ll either watch it, play it, or coach it. A molecular microbiologist by day, middle-grade author, sports coach, and general good citizen by night, he blogs about sports/life/training-related topics at www.coachhays.com and writer stuff at www.mikehaysbooks.comTwo of his science essays, The Science of Jurassic Park and Zombie Microbiology 101,  are included in the Putting the Science in Fiction collection from Writer’s Digest Books. He can be found roaming Bluesky under the guise of @mikehays64.bsky.social and @MikeHays64 on Instagram.

 


The O.O.L.F Files

This month on the Out Of Left Field (O.O.L.F.) Files focus on the human body from the perspective of Newton’s Three Laws of Motion. 

What Are Newton’s Laws of Motion? Newton’s First, Second and Third Laws of Motion? (via ThoughtCo.com)

Mapping an entire (fly) brain: A step toward understanding diseases of the human brain (Princeton News)

Physiopedia: Introduction to Human Biomechanics – External Forces

     The basics of how the human body moves with a correlation to Newton’s 3 Laws of Motion.

Innerbody Anatomy Explorer

It’s a pretty cool site to explore twelve major anatomy systems.

Skeletal System

 


 

 

The Witching Hour: Interview with Author Jordan Kopy

Jordan Kopy headshot as a witchFor Halloween, we have the perfect author interview with Jordan Kopy, author of the Theodora Hendrix series. Not only is Jordan’s favorite time to write midnight—the witching hour—but she’s here to talk about her latest middle-grade novel, Theodora Hendrix and the Curious Case of the Cursed Beetle, which is set at Halloween in a haunted mansion with members of the Monstrous League of Monsters (MLM) and one human girl, Theodora. So, how did a human girl end up surrounded by scary creatures and with a Mummy for a Mom? And how did a cursed beetle end up in the mansion? And what problems will it cause? Are you curious? Me too!

Although you’ll have to read the book to find answers to some of those questions, I was also curious about the author, so I’ve asked Jordan a lot of questions to find out how she comes up with such spooky ideas.

Hi, Jordan, so happy to have you with us today. I hope you’re ready for a trick-or-treat bag full of questions. Here’s the first:

Did you have any childhood dreams? If so, did they come true?

I always dreamed of becoming a ballet dancer. I practically lived at the dance studio when I was growing up. Unfortunately, an ankle injury put an end to those aspirations. I then wanted to be an actress – but life had other plans for me!Jordan dancing

Did you love to read as a child? If so, can you tell us some favorite books?

I did! My nose was always stuck in a book. As far as some of my favorites, I adored anything by Roal Dahl – Matilda in particular – and Tamora Pierce’s Alana adventures. I also devoured the Harry Potter series and the Goosebumps series respectively.

What was an early experience where you learned that written language had power?

What a great question! When I was five years old, my mom read me a picture book we’d picked up from the library. I can’t recall the title, only that it was beautifully illustrated and that it told the tale of two troll best friends. In the end, one sacrifices himself to save the other. A beautiful flower grew in the spot where the first troll died, which the remaining troll lovingly tended to for the rest of his days. By the time my mom had finished, I was sobbing. I couldn’t stop! So, that experience certainly stands out as the moment where I learned that the written language has power.

What was your biggest fear when you were young? Did you get over it?

I used to be petrified of sharks. There were many years where I flat-out refused to dip so much as a toe in the ocean. I’m mostly past it now – though I do still get a wee bit anxious going into the water unless its crystal clear!

What advice would you give to your younger self?

To take more chances – to not be so afraid of failing that you never take any risks.

Would you be willing to share an embarrassing elementary school moment?

Presented without comment.Jordan in Dare T-shirt

Is your past woven into the story? If so, how?

Only bits and pieces: like Theodora, I was very much a misfit when I was growing up and had a tough time making friends. Similarly, I share Theodora’s distaste of “rules for rules’ sake”… And I also tend to disregard these! So, those aspects of the story stem from my own history. But beyond those two instances, this tale is very much Theodora’s own.

When did you know you wanted to be a writer?

I first considered becoming a writer when I was around 22. By 23, I knew I wanted to be one! I had been working in finance for about a year at that point. The hours were long and grueling, so attending dance classes or participating in local theater was out. Still aching to do something creative, I decided to try my hand at writing. The rest is history!

What drew you to writing?

The same thing that drew me to ballet and to acting – escapism! I love entering a new world, meeting a new character…the brilliant thing about being a writer is that you not only get to disappear into these things; you get to create them! It’s very, very cool.

What is your favorite and/or most challenging part of being a writer?

My favorite part about being a writer is the moment when I’m working on a new idea and the pieces begin to click into place. When I eventually come up for air, it’s not unusual for me to find that several hours have passed – that’s when I know that I’ve come up with something worth pursuing. My least favorite part of being a writer is facing the rejection which inherently accompanies a career in the arts – the highs are so high, but the lows are so low. This industry definitely requires a thick skin!

Have you had any careers besides writing?

I have – I previously worked in financial services for thirteen years.

Jordan and her little sister dressed up for Halloween

Jordan and her little sister dressed up for Halloween

How did you come up with the idea for Theodora Hendrix?

My mom was visiting me, and we were watching one of our favorite films, My Cousin Vinny. The actor who played the judge, Fred Gwynne, also played Herman Munster on The Munsters, a television show from the ‘60s. My mom pointed out this fact repeatedly – at least a dozen times – which must have stuck with me, because the next morning I woke up with an idea for a story about a human girl being raised by a family of monster superheroes. I jumped out of bed, grabbed my laptop, and began to write. Two hours later, I had written the opening chapters of what would become my debut novel!

What inspired you to write about a human girl among monsters?

I love a “fish out of water” tale, so when the idea for a story about a little girl growing up with a family of monster superheroes popped into my head (see above!), I couldn’t wait to dive in. I had so much fun creating the various monsters and thinking about what it might be like to live in a mansion-full of them: normally, we think of the monsters as the strange ones, but in Theodora’s case, she’s the odd one!

Are the characters based on anyone you know?

Not really. I might borrow certain characteristics here and there from people I know, but I don’t tend to model my characters after them. For me, a lot of the fun in writing is in imagining what could be, versus what is – I don’t want too much of my “real” life to infiltrate the fantasy!

Did you have pets while growing up or now that made their way into the story?

Camy the cat in a vampire costume

Camy in her vampire costume

I had many pets while I was growing up: hamsters, fish, cats, dogs…I miss them all dearly. Sometimes, they do make their way into my stories: I had a clever black cat, Mischief, who appeared as (a magical version of) himself in my first, unpublished manuscript. And my current cat, a lovable but naughty Maine Coon named Camy, is the inspiration for Bandit, a masked vampire cat, in the Theodora Hendrix series.

What gave you the idea to focus on Egyptian artifacts and curses? And did you have to do research?

While I was drafting the first book in the series, I especially enjoyed writing the character of Mummy. In addition to being Theodora’s – well, mummy, she’s also a fierce warrior who runs the Monstrous League of Monsters’ Reform School. For the series’ second book, I wanted to explore Mummy’s backstory – just how did she come to possess such a unique and impressive assortment of skills? – and that’s where ancient Egypt came in. I loved learning about different mythologies when I was growing up, so it was a great deal of fun to revisit some of those stories!

Since the book features a Halloween party, can you share any holiday traditions or foods you enjoy at Trick or Treat time?

My favorite Halloween tradition is watching Hocus Pocus on the final Saturday night in October. Every October, my husband and I watch Halloween-themed movies all month long, but we always save Hocus Pocus for last. It’s such a great, campy film!

Can you tell us a little about the other books in the series?

Sure! Book One is Theodora Hendrix and the Monstrous League of Monsters, Cover for the book Theodora Hendrix and the Monstrous League of Monsterswhere we first meet Theodora and her monster family. We’re also introduced to Dexter Adebola, Theodora’s first-ever human friend; Ms. Frumple, Theodora’s horrible head teacher; an evil villain who shall not be named – yet; and a mysterious narrator. The final and third installment is Theodora Hendrix and the Snare of the Shadowmongers. It sees Theodora and Dexter going on a grand adventure in New York City, where they meet a slew of new monsters – some of which have the terrifying ability to destroy other monsters’ powers and to give humans unending nightmares for life. In the end, Theodora uncovers the truth about her human parents and just why it was that they abandoned her in a haunted graveyard some ten years earlier.Cover of book: Theodora Hendrix and the Snare of the Shadowmongers

Is there anything more you’d like to share about this book?

I had such a blast writing it – and I hope you all have a blast reading it, too!

The novel has so many funny moments, do you have any tips for writing humor?

Thank you very much! The best tip I have is to be yourself – what do you think is funny? If you’re laughing at what you write, there’s a good chance that your readers might as well. I also find it helpful to consider the following:

  1. Know your audience. Different age groups will find different things funny, so it’s important to keep who you’re writing for in mind.
  2. Try different techniques. Satire and irony might work well in one scene or story, while slapstick might be more effective in another. Others still might benefit from unexpected twists, hyperbole, puns, wordplay etc.
  3. Don’t force it. If the humor feels contrived, or if the timing or the context is off, the joke might fall flat. In that case, it might be better to hold off; not every scene or story requires humor in order to be effective.

Did you leave anything out of this book that you wish you could have included? If so, what?

No, I don’t think so!

Cover for the book Theodora Hendrix and the Curious Case of the Cursed BeetleWhat do you hope readers will take away from your book?

I hope readers walk away from this book and think, wow, that was so much fun! I also hope that young readers, especially those who might identify as misfits (I’m with you!), walk away feeling encouraged that the traits which others might view as “unique” are the very things which make them special – and which true friends will appreciate.

Illustrator Chris Jevons created the humorous art. Did you have any input into the character design or scenes?

Chris is unbelievably talented – I’m so lucky that our publisher paired us up! We worked closely in terms of character and setting design: I’m a very visual writer, so I make a point of including descriptive language in my prose. When we were first starting out, I pulled that verbiage into a “character description” document and shared it with Chris so that he had an idea of each character’s major characteristics; it’s super important that the artwork matches the text – otherwise, readers might get confused. We were both thrilled with the end result! I would love to work with him again someday.

Do you have any message or advice for the teachers and parents who will be sharing your book with their students and families?

I wanted to tell the story of a young misfit who was beginning to find her voice – and building the confidence to use it: I’m passionate about empowering young girls and women to speak up for what they believe in. I’m also passionate about encouraging children to appreciate each other’s differences, and I hope this also comes across in Theodora’s various friendships with humans and monsters alike. In addition to these, there’s also a theme of found families, which the series makes a point to celebrate.

What are you working on now?

I’m working on two very different manuscripts: the first is another middle grade comedy-horror while the second is a dark young adult contemporary fantasy. I’m having tons of fun writing both!

We also asked Jordan a few random questions:

Can you share your favorite game or toy from childhood/middle school days?

Scrabble! I used to play with my late grandfather – I only beat him once!

Did you ever run away from home?

No way, I was too much of a scaredy-cat for that!

When do you like to write?

I’ll write whenever, wherever! But my favorite time to write is at midnight, the witching hour: it feels like the whole world is asleep except for me (and maybe Camy) …My imagination really seems to come alive in those quieter, moonlit moments.

Ooo… that makes me shiver. If you want more thrills and chills, be sure to pick up a copy of Jordan Kopy’s latest book.

About Theodora Hendrix and the Curious Case of the Cursed Beetle:

If you think monsters don’t exist, just ask Theodora Hendrix. The second in a brilliantly funny new series, perfect for fans of Amelia Fang.
 
After facing down an evil hag, a thieving skele-crow and an army of the undead, ten-year-old Theodora Hendrix is certain she can handle anything – that is, until she meets the unpleasant Inspector Shelley and her even more unpleasant pet rat. Shelley and Ratsputin have come to spy on the MLM, and are determined to make trouble at every turn. Then Theodora makes a discovery of her own: a cursed beetle. She needs to destroy it without attracting the attention of the inspector – and fast. The stakes couldn’t be higher: if Theodora fails, her beloved monster family will rot in the dankest, darkest prisons of Transylvania. . .

About Jordan Kopy

Jordan Kopy is a born and raised New Yorker who now lives in London with her husband and poorly behaved (but lovable) cat. A financial services professional by day (no idea how that happened), Jordan spends her nights with ghouls, witches, and the occasional evil hag. She’s the author of the Theodora Hendrix middle grade series. For more information, follow her on Instagram @Jordan_Kopy or find her on her website at JordanKopy.com.

Pack for Where You’re Going: How to Write with Intent

Sitting down to write a book without a plan is like going on vacation without deciding on a destination. An exciting new idea will tempt you to simply throw things in a bag and run to the airport. But, like a heavy backpack, the farther along you get into your first draft, the more you start to feel the weight of all the decisions you haven’t made. Doubt catches up to you in the terminal. Where is this story going? How do you know if the idea is strong? What should happen, and who should it happen to?

The best way to start writing is by setting intentions. Intent is the why that informs your story, and knowing that will help you with the what and how as you write. Intent will help you make decisions on everything from theme to plot to syntax. It tells you what needs to be in the story and what doesn’t. Put another way, if you know where you want to go, you’ll know exactly what you need to pack.

 

A traveler sitting on her colorful suitcase at the beach | Setting intent with writing

Photo by Anastasia Nelen on Unsplash.

Using Theme to Set Intent

When you sit down to start a new project, it’s vital to know what you want to say. Theme is a great way to begin. I always recommend approaching theme as a sentence rather than a word or phrase like friendship or coming of age. This way, the theme becomes more dynamic and engaging because it’s expressing what you want to say about that topic. Here are ways you could craft a theme:

Friendship → Friends help you find out who you are.

Coming of age → Growing up means taking responsibility for what you care about.

As you can see, these sentences go a lot farther in helping you decide what the story will be about. To find your own theme, consider the words or phrases you associate with your book. When you have a grasp of the topic, think about what you want to say about it. What perspective would you like to share with your readers?

Using Intent for Plot and Character

Once you’ve got your theme, you’ve set an intention for what you want to say. Now let’s look at the elements of the story itself: the plot and characters that will make it happen. How can you use these elements to support what you want to say? Let’s go back to the examples above to see how intention can help you decide what needs to be in your book.

In the first example, you might be looking at plot elements that touch on identity and the kinds of characters that will emphasize that thread:

Friends help you find out who you are.

→ Your main character is unsure where they fit into a new group, school, or neighborhood.

→ A talent show or contest is coming up, and everyone is expected to participate.

→ Something or someone has changed your main character’s perception of themselves for the worse.

In the second example, you might consider ways to show the difficulties kids face as they start becoming more independent.

Growing up means taking responsibility for what you care about.

→ Your main character is brainstorming ways to raise money.

→ Your character needs to help out with a younger sibling.

→ Maybe they plant a garden, start a club, or practice hard to make a sports team.

These are just a few ideas, but I hope you can see how intent can help you see ways to use your characters and plot to keep working towards your intention.

Using Intent for Tone and Mood

Intention can also help you make decisions on the scene and sentence level. If you want to write a scary story, for instance, you need to think about everything the story needs to make readers bite their fingernails and scooch to the edge of their chairs. That’s where word choice, imagery, and setting come into play. A scary story might emphasize light and dark, creepy noises, unusual smells, or bad tastes. On the other hand, if you’re writing a funny story, you might reach for brighter imagery, more playful narration, and breezier verbs.

Reach Your Destination

When you set your intention, you have everything you need to start writing. Now you can get to work choosing elements that will support the book; everything from characters to plot to the way it’s written. Intention will also help you finish and revise. You simply have to ask yourself, “Did I accomplish what I set out to do?” If the answer is no, you can revisit scenes or chapters that aren’t supporting the intention you set and make changes so the story can get back on track. Remember, only pack what you need for where you’re going!

Interested in how other writers get started? Check out this article from the Mixed-Up Files archives!