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STEM Tuesday– Computers– Writing Tips & Resources

Hello, Everyone, allow me to introduce myself, I’m Dr. Miral A Khalil, a pediatrician who studies child and adolescent psychiatry. I’m new to STEM Tuesday and I am excited to dive into this month’s topic of Computers.

I want to discuss AI and how it might work in a classroom.

WHY USE AI?

I’m aware of how polarizing the use of AI is within kid-lit and academia — and I must say that’s warranted, given the legitimate fear of plagiarism, cheating, and theft of intellectual property. But I do insist that, used with some SOP, AI is an incredible tool to teach children anything. Who am I to talk about AI? Teenagers and children alike might assume that as a physician I only look at how AI is revolutionizing biotechnology and medicine. Some might even assume that I must not know what AI is — because 39 years old, is dinosaur era old to many of them.

I, on the other hand, grew up watching The Jetsons [the cartoon from the future], Mission Impossible movies, and Indiana Jones; to their immense dismay, I do know quite a lot about technology.

But what nobody can fathom is my deep admiration for how villains and evil geniuses are portrayed in kid lit and film bypassing technology. Think of a laser trip wire meant to protect museum art — and the burglar who steals it anyway.

HUMANS ARE INTRIGUED BY IT

In short, I absolutely adore how the human mind is able to surmount an apparently insurmountable problem — just like zigzagging through an impossible maze of infrared trip wire without triggering an alarm.

I study child and adolescent psychiatry, so I can say this with some authority: children, adolescents, teens, heck even adults, are often more intrigued by an apparently complex problem being solved. That’s part of why AI has gained such a large footprint in all walks of our life so quickly.

Instead of fearing AI  technology, we must embrace it, learn from it, and command it — not the other way around. This fear trickles down from adults to children, and it’s counterproductive. An ongoing, open conversation around the ethics of usage — even challenging students to find the blind spots in AI — is an incredible way to strengthen their faith in their own intelligence; always being superior to whatever technological advances are being made. The human mind reigns supreme.

ACITIVITIES YOU CAN USE

Today, I’ve brought you a few practical activities that can be done with a group of middle and upper elementary students. But first, I want to highlight two books that I’ve used with my own children and have recommended to other parents.

Atlas Obscura bookBook 1 is Atlas Obscura Explorer’s Guide to Inventing the World, written by Jennifer Swanson and Dylan Thuras and illustrated by Ruby Fresson (2025). This book can be read aloud to children as young as third grade, as it combines both science and geography. I love when a book allows you to travel around the world within its pages — recognizing how human beings ALL around the world have contributed to the technological advances we enjoy today. Giving credit to ALL people isn’t only intellectual honesty; it’s important in today’s ever-polarized society.

 

 

 

 

Future Tense bookBook 2 is Future Tense: How We Made Artificial Intelligence — and How It Will Change Everything, by Martha Brockenbrough (2024). This book is geared toward middle grade, but my rising 5th grader enjoyed it read aloud just as much as my rising 7th grader did. What I truly enjoyed is that it gave me a segue to have a conversation with my almost-teenage son about how AI has its limitations and is NOT superior to the human mind.

 

 

 

 

Now on to the three practical activities that can be done in a classroom. These activities can help students break down AI and understand how it works for us.

Activity 1 — Drumroll please: build a trip-wire escape room.

Have students design and then attempt to beat their own “laser” security system — the same logic, in miniature, as the museum heist scenes they’ve seen in movies.

Materials: yarn or string in a bright color, painter’s tape, small bells tied to each strand as “alarms,” and a stopwatch. (For older or more advanced students, you can upgrade to a simple circuit kit with a photoresistor and buzzer, or a laser pointer and a small mirror — supervised closely.)

In teams, students string yarn across a doorway or taped-off area at varying heights and angles, tying a bell to each strand. Before they build, have them map their layout on paper first — this is the “algorithm”: a precise, ordered set of instructions for exactly where each strand goes. Then teams swap rooms and try to cross another team’s course without triggering a single bell, timing their attempt.

Debrief as a class: What made a course harder to solve? Did more trip wires make it more secure, or just more predictable? This makes the concept of an algorithm physical — a fixed set of rules a system follows — and it’s a direct, hands-on bridge to how AI systems themselves are built on layered, patterned instructions.

Activity 2 — Investigate the origin of the word “algorithm,” and who pioneered this work.

Algorithm being the basis of most AI technology, we must recognize the role of the people behind it. Have students research where the word comes from (it traces to the 9th-century Persian mathematician Muhammad ibn Musa al-Khwarizmi), what problems his work originally solved, and how that math eventually became the foundation of modern computing. Have them also find one modern example of an algorithm they encounter daily — a search engine, a recommendation feed, a video game’s difficulty setting.

Activity 3 — Investigate “Web War I”: the 2007 cyberattacks on Estonia.

In 2007, Estonia became the target of one of the first large-scale, coordinated cyberattacks on an entire country. Over several weeks, government ministries, banks, and news outlets were knocked offline by waves of distributed denial-of-service (DDoS) attacks — essentially a flood of automated, algorithm-driven requests overwhelming a system until it collapses. The attack coincided with a heated political dispute between Estonia and Russia; while much of the malicious traffic was traced to Russian sources, the Russian government denied any official involvement, and it was never definitively proven who ordered the attacks.

Have students research what happened, why it’s sometimes called “Web War I,” and why it led NATO to open a cyber defense research center in Tallinn the following year. It’s a great chance to also talk about attribution — why figuring out who is really behind an attack is one of the hardest problems in cybersecurity, then and now.

Any of these three activities can be assigned as a classroom project and will lead to an incredibly rich discussion covering history, geography, and electronic engineering.

Every one of them asks students to do the same thing a movie villain, a cybersecurity researcher, or an inventor does: look at a system built to be hard to beat, and beat it anyway. That’s not a reason to fear AI.

It’s the best argument for teaching kids to understand it — because the mind that can map a trip-wire course, trace a word to a 9th-century mathematician, or make sense of a real-world cyberattack is the same mind that will never be obsolete.

Dr. Miral A Khalil is a CO-RA for SCBWI MDDEWV. She is a globe trotting pediatrician who homeschools her four children whilst on medical missions.

STEM Tuesday– Computers– In the Classroom

Hi Everyone! We offer you a special STEM Tuesday post today and hope that you enjoy it.

 

Artificial Intelligence is a hot topic lately for educators, writers, readers, and students. There have been numerous discussions, if not arguments, about how to proceed with the direction of AI when it comes to education and also in writing children’s books.  One positive outcome recently was at a conference held in Boston this summer.  At the America’s Youth AI Festival, 93 high school students from all 50 states met with other organizers and developed guidelines for AI use in schools.  As reported in Education Week, their suggestions are as follows:    Education Week, 8/7/2026

 

It should emphasize human relationships and judgement. It should protect the learning process while allowing students to build skills for appropriate use.  It should preserve students’ and educators’ right to refuse to use the technology.

 

Children’s literature is another approach to help educate and inform us all about AI.  More and more children’s books are being written that educate and discuss the background, infrastructure, and possible future of Artificial Intelligence.  The From the Mixed Up Files blog came up with an excellent list of recent books to use with children/students.  

 

Examples of books about AI: 

 

Science Comics: Computers: How Digital Hardware Works 

By Perry E. Metzger, Penelope Spector and Jerel Dye

 

This is a graphic-style book designed to teach about computer hardware, so it goes beyond AI.  I believe it would be of interest to kids enthused by graphic novels, upper elementary/middle school students, computer/technology teachers, and others interested in the background and history of computers, and how it relates to AI today. It is written in an engaging style, with “dinosaurs” dressed in Victorian garb as the main characters.  The authors include a website, www.veniac.com, which is listed as having activities for kids and adults. I checked out the website, and it is still a work in progress, but it’s useful to keep in mind for future engaging activities beyond the book.  

 

See Inside AI: Artificial Intelligence (by Alex Frith and Victoria M. Williams, 

Illustrated by Beatrix Hatcher)

 

This is a comprehensive, “lift-the-flap” style book that will engage many learners, from early elementary through upper elementary/some middle schoolers.  It starts by defining “What is Artificial Intelligence?” and digs deeper by describing “How Does AI Work?”  Some engaging tidbits in here will hook most kids, such as how AI can help track wildlife that might be in danger, such as Koalas in the recent wildfires in Australia.  It is also relatable to kids, in that it mentions video games using AI to create characters that act in more unpredictable, innovative ways. Another high-interest grabber:  using AI to develop toilets that can update you on your health, if you so choose!  

 

The book also touches on higher-level issues with AI, such as: Can AI make art?  How should it be regulated?  What happens when AI can design new robots/computers/AI models itself?  This book can be a jumping-off point for discussions about the future of AI, including ethics. 

 

Kids and teachers can also learn more about AI and this book by going to this link usborne.com/Quicklinks and typing in the name of the book: See Inside AI Artificial Intelligence 

 

AI Vocabulary from the book:  

Narrow AI: only able to do one specific type of problem-solving

Deep Learning: training computers to teach themselves

Natural Language Processing: technology that helps computers understand human language (chatbots)

 

Resources for further information on AI and education/curriculum/policy: 

 

Day of AI: is a free, global “education program and curriculum created by researchers at MIT RAISE to introduce K-12 students to AI”.  It is designed to be non-technical and focuses on hands-on, engaging activities. 

Day of AI: Homepage 

 

They have a variety of activities for many age levels and interests:

 

How We Teach Machines, Ages 4-8 

 

Changing the Game: AI in Sports (ages 11-18) 

 

AI: Family Resources 

 

Common Sense Media AI Family Guide 

 

MIT RAISE: is an organization that advocates for “responsible AI for social empowerment and education”. They focus on AI literacy, ethics, and tools to help educate about AI.

 

MIT RAISE Homepage: Includes curriculum, policy, and studies links

 

 

MIT RAISE Playground Homepage

 

MIT RAISE Playground: Dance, Train Your Own Robot etc

 

By Susan Kenyon, a former special educator who believes that good STEM books can help with the literacy problem. When not writing non-fiction, she can be found exploring the United States.  Recently based in the PNW, she is now off to explore fossils, mountains, and marmots in the Rockies with her favorite little people.

STEM Tuesday– Light Pollution– Writing Tips and Resources

In November of 2007, we had a terrible ice storm in my small town. Trees and power lines were decimated. We even lost our basketball goal in the driveway when a large oak limb dropped on top of it. We were without power for a week after our house was mistakenly skipped over by the out-of-town power crews on their first pass through our neighborhood, making the wait longer. My family did not appreciate the beanie weenie meal I cooked on the gas grill and ended up spending more time at a friend’s house because they had electricity while I held down the fort through the long, dark, and cold nights.

Although this was not a pleasant experience in any way, shape, or form, there was one sliver of a silver lining from the ice storm. It knocked out the streetlight at the intersection in front of our house and several up and down the street. It was dark. It was fantastic for stargazing. The night sky popped. Planets, stars, constellations, and the Milky Way jumped out in a way I had not experienced anywhere inside the city limits. I felt like a kid again from the back patio staring at the heavens hanging so bright and close that one could almost reach out and touch it. Glorious!

With the extent of the damage to higher priority areas in the city and county, it was a solid six months before the streetlights were repaired, so it was one “dark” period in my life I miss to this very day. After the streetlight came back online, the stargazing party was over, and it was back to stargazing through its light pollution. 🙁 

ThatOneEli, CC BY-SA 4.0 <https://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0>, via Wikimedia Commons

What does my 20-year-old ice storm experience have to do with a STEM Tuesday Writing Tips & Resources post on light pollution?

Well, maybe nothing at all and just a rambling of an old man. But, in writing, we can create so much light of a pollution-like story flow through a frenetic pace or constant action that it masks the reader’s experience. Keeping the reader in a steady Full Speed Ahead Mode makes it difficult for them to see the stars, planets, and galaxies of the story. In other words, they miss the full beauty of the reading experience because they are never offered the opportunity to step away from the bright light, allow what just happened to sink in, and prepare the brain space for what comes next.

The inverse is also possible. We can write a piece in Low Speed Mode with little addition of action or light, and the reader’s experience is masked in that constant lowkey vibe. The key is to mix and blend the levels of brightness to shine a light where needed and also reduce the light levels to allow the time and reflection necessary to keep the reader engaged.

We need to strive for those moments of awe after the streetlight goes dark and the night sky bursts in all its glory. The reader needs those times in the story when they lie on the cool grass, staring at the Big Dipper or Orion’s Belt, and feeling as if the Milky Way galaxy is just an arm’s length away. 

In my recent regular MUF post, The Book Called to Me Again, I wrote about the genius that is Gary D. Schmidt. Look, a lot happens in Gary D. Schmidt stories. Good things. Bad things. Things that make you laugh. Things that make you cry. His skill as a writer shows when he amplifies these inherently bright story light things by placing them in juxtaposition to periods of dim story light. With the bright levels temporarily dimmed, the reader can not only appreciate the good, the bad, the funny, or the emotional story point that just happened, but have the emotional and mental space to process it. 

Combatting the light pollution in my writing is something I’m constantly working on. I write from the part of my brain that is still controlled by the middle school Mike. This is a blessing and a curse. Middle-school-brained Mike offers a unique perspective for creating stories. My struggle, however, is fighting the young Mike in my head who wants to see more car chases, more explosions, and more jumping from the roof of one building to another. You know, the middle school boy stuff. 

Learn to control the light pollution in your creative work. Shine the light brightly when it needs to be shone and learn to dim, or shut it off when it’s not needed. Ebb and flow to give the reader the headspace they need to stay engaged without needing a pair of very dark sunglasses.

Happy summer writing! May you shine your creative light without creating light pollution.

Mike Hays has worked hard from a young age to be a well-rounded individual. A well-rounded, equal-opportunity sports enthusiast, that is. If they keep a score, he’ll either watch it, play it, or coach it. A molecular microbiologist by day, middle-grade author, sports coach, and general good citizen by night, he blogs about sports/life/training-related topics at www.coachhays.com and writer stuff at www.mikehaysbooks.comTwo of his science essays, The Science of Jurassic Park and Zombie Microbiology 101,  are included in the Putting the Science in Fiction collection from Writer’s Digest Books. He can be found roaming Bluesky under the guise of @mikehays64.bsky.social and @MikeHays64 on Instagram.


The O.O.L.F Files

This month on the Out Of Left Field (O.O.L.F.) Files, we

DarkSky

Our DarkSky Approved program works with communities, manufacturers, retailers, designers, and others to evaluate and certify dark sky friendly outdoor lighting equipment, as well as dark sky friendly outdoor lighting projects.

What is Light Pollution? via DarkSky

Light Pollution Map from the University of Colorado at Boulder

ArcGIS Online Global Artificial Sky 3D Interactive Map

https://www.arcgis.com/home/webscene/viewer.htm

John C. Wells Planetarium at James Madison University

Light Pollution: The Overuse & Misuse of Artificial Light at Night via the John C. Wells Planetarium

Astrophysicist Kelsey Johnson’s TED Talk

The problem of light pollution — and 5 ridiculously easy ways to fix it

And finally, a wink to my mother and father, who always yelled at their teenage sons for leaving “every light in the universe on when we weren’t using it” and listening to our loud, noise-polluting rock music at wall-shaking volumes.

Thank you, Mom and Dad, for introducing us to the world of environmental activism at home.

Rock and Roll Ain’t Noise Pollution” by Australian rock band AC/DC from their classic 1980 album Back in Black. Note: This album may or may not have knocked a picture frame or two from the walls upstairs in our childhood home. For the record, I plead the Fifth.