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STEM Tuesday– Amphibians– Writing Tips & Resources

Hello! Welcome back to STEM Tuesday’s Writing Tips and Resources. I’m Stephanie.

Did you know that axolotls are amphibians? I hadn’t really thought about it before, but it’s true; they’re salamanders. And actually, they’re strange ones, since they don’t fully grow up, but instead stay in their “tadpole” stage, keeping their gills and living underwater completely. Very rarely, they can spontaneously morph into terrestrial animals. When this happens, their gills recede and they depend on their lungs to breathe.

Anyway, happy poetry month! If you’ve read last week’s post, you’re familiar with poems about frogs, like the informative ones found in Amphibian Acrobats. Today I’m excited to share two writerly resources with surprisingly relevant titles. The first, by a Utah poet and professor, is Real Toads, Imaginary Gardens: On Reading and Writing Poetry Forensically (2024). Its title references American poet Marianne Moore, who said that a poem is “an imaginary garden with real toads in them.” Elaborating on that, Rekdal states that a poem is “an artificial structure, yes, but one in which something genuine can live” (5). That definition sings—and croaks, and ribbits—for me. More on frog calls to come. We’ve got one long exercise today. Let’s hop to it.

Part 1 | Gathering Raw Materials

Book coverRekdal writes that, “When it comes to reading or writing poetry, we have to balance between the forensic and the creative, between staying within the bounds of definition and fact and moving into the realm of the interpretive” (35).

Thus, the first step is to gather interesting details for your imaginary garden: nickel-sized glass frogs, perhaps. You’re free to depart from the theme of amphibians, but if you like a good challenge, start there. Think “forensically,” gathering precise words as rhetorical evidence. Imaginary gardens are curated… this is your flowery language, your favorite nature facts rearranged into poetic phrasings. With every additional noun, you’re populating the garden, constructing the banks of the pond. Give yourself at least 15 minutes to brainstorm.

After assembling a motley group of characters, setting details, and imagery, it’s time to begin considering interpretation. How will you make meaning(s) of these things? Rekdal offers this insight, “If anything, poems offer me patterns of expectation and then disregard them in ways I find either delightful, annoying, instructive, or baffling” (3). How can you invite readers to feel those emotions? What might your metaphorical toad be—your something real? Aside from lyrical language, what’s the second layer to the poem? How can you take it from not-story to story? Let’s let those thoughts percolate while we try the next part.

Part 2 | Finding and Shaping Story

Book cover

The second writerly resource for today is A Swim in a Pond in the Rain by George Sanders. This book addresses structure through several guided readings of Russian short stories. He writes, “We’re always asking, of a work we’re reading (even if it’s one of our own): ‘Is it story yet?’ That’s the moment we’re seeking as we write. We’re revising and revising until we write the text up, so to speak, and it produces that ‘now it’s a story’ feeling” (50). But what is a story? He answers, “We could understand a story as simply a series of…expectation/resolution moments” (12). Isn’t that interesting? That’s also what Paisley Rekdal said about pattern, expectation, surprise. A story, or in our case, poem, has a call-and-response structure. What must come first? What details are essential? What will change? How does the poem end? How can the beginning enhance the end?

Choose an existing poem. If you’re feeling stuck, here are some suggestions: “[rain frog thorn bug bat tent], “Naming the Heartbeats,” or “Amphibians.” Before you’re tempted to read the poem in its entirety, cover up the last 2-6 lines. Read the first portion, then ask yourself these questions. What energy has the poem built up? How do you expect it to end? What ending feels so obvious that it would be disappointing? Now read the rest of the poem. What helps the poem land with a satisfying feeling?

Using your materials from part one, construct a poem that “responds alertly to itself” (Saunders, 29), that makes energy and then uses it (35), “advanc[ing] the story in a non-trivial way” (42). This is much easier said than done, but as Saunders teaches, “That’s really all a story is: a limited set of elements that we read against one another” (48). Tend your imaginary garden. Hide some toads. Find your voice, whether that frog-song is a cro-qui or a different onomatopoeia altogether. (They make lots of different calls!)

Remember that your poem, though it may turn toward a surprising resolution, doesn’t need to answer questions or conclude anything. Its power is the shared journey between writer and reader: sensing and thinking together. Poems can never avoid being situated, being about something, whether or not the author intends it. But as Paisley Rekdal wrote, “If we can all agree on the exact meaning of a poem, doesn’t that suggest the poem itself may be too narrow, even lifeless?” (Kidlit poems are the exception, in which we routinely opt for clarity and conclusions. But write this one for yourself! Poetry-joy is contagious.)

For themed writing prompts geared toward kids, check out Amazing Amphibians from our book list, specifically pages 49 (“Write a Slimy Story”) and 85 (“Write an Amphibian Haiku”). And of course, I’d love it if you clicked over to visit me at StephanieWritesForKids.com for more writerly tips and book recommendations.

Happy writing,

Stephanie

Stephanie Jackson is a mother of four kiddos ages 5-14. Her kidlit work has been published in Cricket magazine, Dirigible Balloon, and elsewhere. She holds an English creative writing degree and writes from her book-glutted home in northern Utah.

Author Spotlight: Allan Wolf

In today’s Author Spotlight, Jo Hackl chats with award-winning author Allan Wolf about his novel, Junius Leak and the Spiraling Vortex of Doom. Allan Wolf is the author of picture books, poetry, and young adult novels. Booklist has named his historical verse novel, The Watch That Ends the Night, one of  “The 50 Best Young Adult Books of All Time.” Allan is also the author of the nonfiction graphic novel The Vanishing of Lake Peigneur, illustrated by Jose Pimienta; and the poetry collection The Gift of the Broken Teacup, illustrated by Jade Orlando. His books celebrate his love of research, history, science, and poetry. He is also a skilled and seasoned performer of over 30 years. Allan Wolf’s dynamic author talks and poetry presentations for all ages are meaningful, educational and unforgettable. Florida Reading Quarterly calls Wolf “the gold standard of performing poetry.” He is a two-time winner of the North Carolina Young Adult Book Award, and a recipient of the Bank Street College Claudia Lewis Award for Poetry. Allan lives in Roanoke, Virginia, with his wife, his sister, and a dog named Mo. Learn more at www.allanwolf.com.

All about the book:

When thirteen-year-old Junius Leak—expert on waterbodies and creator of the encyclopedic Amazing Waterbodies of the World—steps foot on Uncle Spot’s rickety dock on Lake Peigneur, the truth assails him: he may love waterbodies, but that doesn’t mean they love him back. The latest in a long line of Junius Leaks, he’s the first to be doomed to ten days of awkwardness and boredom on a houseboat with a relative he doesn’t know while his parents “work on” their marriage. Delcambre, Louisiana, where Junius was born, is awash with unwelcome surprises.

He determines to learn why his mom left town when he was a baby—and to conquer his fear of water at the same time. But the lake has other plans for him, plans tied to a hundred-year-old family feud and a swashbuckling mystery. When disaster strikes, Junius must dive deep within to emerge an unlikely hero.

Alternating viewpoints spin the perceptions of a Highly Sensitive Person (HSP) — and the wry voice of a lake with a long memory—into an inventive tale of sunken treasure and buried secrets anchored by a breathtaking true event.

The Background of Junius Leak:

JH: The title alone is wonderfully dramatic. Can you tell us about the real-life events that inspired Junius Leak and the Spiraling Vortex of Doom?

AW: It was a Thursday, November 20th, 1980. Texaco had set up a 130-foot-tall drilling derrick on a 15-foot-tall platform in the middle of Lake Peigneur, a 1200-acre shallow freshwater lake in southern Louisiana. Texaco was exploring for the oil that gathers in pockets around the massive salt dome beneath the lake. When the derrick’s 14-inch drill bit accidentally pierced a massive salt mine that had been excavated beneath the lake, water began to drain into the mine, eventually opening up into a vortex, a quarter-mile wide, effectively draining the lake’s 3.5 billion gallons of water like a big bathtub. The ever-widening sinkhole, created a 150-foot waterfall made up of water from the Delcambre Canal that had begun to flow in reverse, filling the lake back in with salt-water from the Gulf of Mexico, nine miles away. Within four hours the hole had devoured a tugboat, eleven large salt barges, two working derricks, and about 58 acres of a beautiful botanical garden located near the lake’s shore. Amazingly, after another 48 hours, Lake Peigneur filled back in, transforming from a 10-foot deep freshwater lake into a salt-water lake with a 250-foot-deep crater in the middle of it. Even with 55 miners working beneath the lake that day, not a single human life was lost.

JH: That disaster served as inspiration for this story in your graphic novel, The Vanishing of Lake Peigneur illustrated by Jose Pimienta (You can find the interview with Allan and Jose here). How did you go about creating the fictional character of Junius Leak to explore this world?

AW:  The historical fiction story, Junius Leak and the Spiraling Vortex of Doom, grew out of the same research I was doing for my graphic nonfiction account, The Vanishing of Lake Peigneur. You might say that the two books were like paternal twins, developing separately while sharing the same womb. I began to see so many metaphors (swirling, spiraling, loss, sudden rejuvenation, etc.) emerging from the historical facts that a fictional story jumped out at me unbidden. I was already keen to try my hand at middle-grade fiction, so twelve-year-old Junius Leak sprung out of me. I had been exploring the world of Lake Peigneur as an adult for so long, it made sense to create my own 12-year-old doppelganger, Junius Leak to experience that world with me.

JH: You wrote in your author’s note that there is a lot of Allan Wolf in Junius. To which parts of Junius do you most relate?

AW:  As a child I was profoundly lonely and, even when I started making friends, I found these relationships to be exhausting and awkward. I now know that I suffered from some pretty debilitating anxiety, but back then no one knew what anxiety was. Back in 60’s and 70’s it was usually just called cowardice. And that’s how I always felt, like a coward pretending to be a normal person. I had escapes that helped me feel at ease: athletics, reading, skateboarding, and (especially) writing on my bedroom walls. Junius shares a lot of my own quirks, and he uses a lot of my own coping mechanisms.

JH: Did Junius surprise you at any point while you were writing the book?

AW:  Yes. I think any really good character (when given enough freedom) will surprise the author. With Junius I had to write a good bit to arrive at that spot in which he took on an intrinsically motivated life of his own. Picture a grown-up helping a kid to ride a bike. The grown-up runs alongside, one hand on the handlebars, one hand on the child’s back. The kid has a nervous but determined look on his face. Gradually the adult lets go and steps away, leaving the kid to zoom off all alone, usually shouting out, “I’m doing it!”

That’s pretty much the relationship between author and character. The author can create the bicycle, and the street, and even the character. But there comes a point in any character’s development when that character begins to make his or her own choices. I was most surprised at how Junius Leak, the character, had sort of a snarky sarcastic streak about him. As a kid who is arguably “on the spectrum,” he has trouble interpreting and projecting social cues. And yet he seems to understand sarcasm which requires a pretty sophisticated sense of one’s self in the world.  And that was perhaps the greatest surprise of all. When all is said and done, Junius Leak has an intrinsic sense of himself, something that I struggled with as a kid.

JH: If you could drop yourself into one scene from the book, which would you choose—and why?

AW:  There is a climactic scene toward the end of the story when something pretty miraculous comes springing up from the depths of the lake. That’s the scene I’d choose, and maybe a few other moments toward the end. I can’t say specifics without spoilers, but I can say that I love scenes when some long-forgotten detail comes back to fill in the last missing piece of a puzzle. Or the missing piece might have been there under your nose all the time. Point is, you’ve been taking this detail (an event or a character maybe) for granted; you’ve dismissed it as only a bit actor. I love these moments because they fill in the gaps emotionally. I love it when the puzzle pieces fall together. I find the emerging sense of order to be very soothing.

Writing for Middle Grade Readers

JH: What drew you to write for middle-grade readers?

AW:  Of all my novels, this is the first directed specifically at middle-grade readers. My books are typically marketed for YA and teens. So Junius Leak and the Spiraling Vortex of Doom, is “my take” on a middle-grade novel. The story unfolds more slowly, perhaps, than a typical middle grade plot. That’s just how I write right now. It’s something that serves me. I’m working out something stylistically. Hopefully with each progressive book, I will get better and better at it. As a professional writer of books for youth, I was drawn to middle grade because I’d never written one, and because middle grade seems the most steadfast place to be right now, in the constantly changing world of publishing.

JH: Middle-grade books often balance humor, adventure, and emotional depth. How did you approach that balance while writing this story?

AW:  When it comes to telling a story, my motto is “You can’t have ha, ha without a little ah ha!.” There’s nothing wrong with a good therapeutic chuckle. I love laughter, as long as it helps to further the story. But the most enduring humor has humanity at its core. So, I’d rather go for the kind of laugh that makes you cry, if that makes sense. Of course, you have to keep readers (young and old) moving forward in a plot-driven direction, but it is those emotional interjections that resonate in readers’ imaginations long after reading the final page.

JH: Were there any books that you loved growing up that influenced your storytelling?

AW:  A few picture books that have stuck with me: Mike Mulligan and his Steam Shovel; Ferdinand the Bull; Harry the Dirty Dog. Chapter books: Winnie the Pooh; Dr. Doolittle, Charlotte’s Web, James and the Giant Peach. And later, the novels of Paul Zindel. Much of my voice, though, comes from later exposure to Karen Hesse, Eloise Greenfield, Karla Kuskin, and especially Paul Fleischman. My own book, Junius Leak, has been compared to Holes by Luis Sacar, and I can see why. That book had a profound impact on me.

Writing Craft

JH: Did this book begin with a character, a plot idea, or your irresistible title?

AW:  As often as not, my book ideas begin with a startling and memorable image. Maybe because I was raised on movies and comic books. The image of the lake’s face swirling like a bathtub, and drawing in trees, boats, houses, and shoreline; that’s what I started with. Or the image of a solitary chimney sticking up out of the water in the middle of a lake; that’s what I start with. Then I might develop plot and character with that main controlling image in mind.

As for the book’s title, I worked with an actor named Junius Leek back in the 1990’s and vowed then to someday use his name as a character in a book. This watery book turned out to be the moment. As for the spiraling part of the title: again, that was inspired by image, and the overambitious vortex of doom is more of an ohmage to melodramatics of youth. It also sounds a bit “piratey,” so winner-winner-chicken-dinner. I do admit, that once I settled on the title, the book began to really take shape. A good title can do that . . . just make everything gel.

JH: Were there any scenes that were especially fun—or especially difficult—to write?

AW:  There is a scene in which Junius reunites with his mother and they have a chat. Originally, I left this scene out. In fact, Junius’ mom never even appeared in the book in real-time. But my editor, Katie Cunningham, thought the mother needed a scene near the end of the story. When I sat down to write it, only then did I realize why I hadn’t written it in the first place. I was dreading where I had to go as a writer. I had to essentially sit down with my own mother (who had recently passed away). That was hard. But worth it.

Jo: How long did it take from the first spark of the idea to the finished manuscript?

AW:  The spark came in 2007 when I first saw the lone chimney rising up out of Lake Peigneur. It was in 2019 when I sold the idea as a two-book deal to Elizabeth Bicknell at Candlewick Press. I researched documents and did in-person interviews for years. The initial writing itself took perhaps two years. I’m always working on more than one thing at a time. So, its often hard to tell what hours are spent on what book.

Jo: What was the biggest revision you made to the story during the editing process?

AW:  Not sure if this is really the “biggest” revision, but it was certainly a memorable edit.  I had named the town sheriff in my book after a real-life sheriff who had played a minor role in the Texaco-Lake Peigneur disaster. My idea was to use his name as a sort of ohmage. Much later I found out this particular sheriff had been a divisive person both personally and professionally. Rather than play into the controversy, I changed the sheriff’s name to Connor Murphy—the name of a little kid who lived down the street from me in Asheville, NC.

JH: What advice would you give to writers trying to write humor for middle-grade readers?

AW:  I would re-read my comments about humor above. Humor without humanity is hollow. Also, I would avoid making a joke at someone’s expense. It is mean and petty. If someone deserves to be put in their place, allow it to happen in the plot without your main protagonist simply acting out of a need for revenge. And of course, you should read a lot, lot, lot of funny books. I recommend Dead End in Norvelt by Jack Gantos.

What’s Next

JH: What projects are you currently working on?

AW:  I have a collection of Christmas poems in the works from Candlewick Press. And I’m writing a memoir (on spec) about how I began writing on my bedroom walls, as a 13 year old . . . fifty years ago!

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Lightning Round!

Favorite place to write:
My desk.

Plotter or pantser?
I pants within a plot.

 If you were not a writer, what might you do for a living?
Mortician. Drummer in a rock band.

Coffee, tea, or some other beverage while writing:
Mostly coffee.

Your favorite writing snacks:

Cheez-its and goldfish.

Favorite fictional hero:

Underdog.

Favorite fictional villain:

Boss Hogg.

Jo: Thanks for chatting with us Allan!

STEM Tuesday– Amphibians– In the Classroom

Studying amphibians is a natural interest for most students.  After all, some amphibians hop, they stick out their tongues to catch their meals, and they go back and forth from land to water.  Studying amphibians is also a great way to expand students’ critical thinking skills through STEM.  Luckily, some great books can help teachers, parents, librarians, and others on this mission.

First of all, what is an amphibian?  By definition, they are a cold-blooded vertebrate animal that usually has two different life stages in two different habitats.  That is, larval in a water stage, and breathing in a land environment.  Amphibians include frogs, toads, newts, and salamanders.  Caecilians are also included, though they are not as well known.  The word amphibian derives from the Greek words “amphi”, which means “both sides”, and “bio”, which means “life”. This refers to the two stages of life in two different environments.

Many engaging books teach and inspire children to learn more about amphibians.  

Background knowledge:

A good way to introduce amphibians as a subject is to assess your students’ background knowledge and introduce some key vocabulary words.  The following links show the life cycle of frogs.  I’ve also included a list of some vocabulary words related to amphibians, gleaned from some of the books in this month’s list.  The words are: 

Ectothermic, vertebrate, aquatic, metamorphosis, and herpetologist.

Frog Life Cycle: Nat Geo Kids: Video and other information on frogs, including visuals of the life cycle.

Amphibian Vocabulary: a list of amphibian vocabulary from books from the list. Tier 2 and 3, also includes a worksheet to help students use and understand words.

KWL Chart: Can be used to introduce amphibians, and gauge what students already know about them, what questions students have, and what they might want to learn!

Book cover of Amphibian Acrobats

Amphibian Acrobats by Leslie Bulion Illustrated by Robert Meganck

This book is a cleverly written and whimsically illustrated book on amphibians that could be used in a classroom in many ways.  It is oriented around a variety of poem styles that describe various amphibians (including caecilians!), and each entry also provides factual information on the habitat, lifecycle, and other details on each animal.  

Some of the other information in the book is actual notes on the kinds of poems, with specific vocabulary and details on each type of poem. There is also information on the current state of amphibians in the world, and how they need our help; they have included resources on how to help.  There is also a great world map that lists where specific native amphibians live, and it also includes their specific threat of extinction. 

The language in each poem is engaging, with inventive and colorful words describing each creature and their activities.  For example:

The Daredevil Free-Climbers:

We will teethe scummy plants,

Then slurp termites and ants,

When we’re fat burrow frogs, down below!

(Amazing Amphibians, page 39 ebook)

I love the use of “scummy” and “slurp termites and ants”, it’s very visual! And, I’m sure that students would enjoy it also!

Different writing techniques are also used, which could be utilized in class:

The Flag Waver:

A rival hopped up next to him, boi-oing!

A rival hopped up next to him.

Frog’s foot shot out-FLAG! -Take a Swim! Boi-oing!

(Amazing Amphibians, page 31 ebook)

We can always use a new way to introduce onomatopoeia! And this would be great as a read-aloud, to get students interested, and to make them think about word usage, and how to hook their readers.

Activities:

As the book focuses on poetry and the creative use of language, I thought a wonderful way to extend the ideas in this book was to have students write their own creative pieces.  This could be adapted to fit many grade levels.  One possibility is that students could pick their own choice of amphibian to research, and then write a “mini” research project on it.  I have attached a mini book template below.  Of course, it could also be done in PowerPoint or Google Slides. 

Mini Book Template/PDF  

Another idea is to have each student write a poem.  Again, they could choose the amphibian of their choice.  A haiku would be a great way to start, and a template is attached below.  The class could even write a haiku together, and then be released to write their own.  I would also focus on the use of creative, imaginative language to specifically describe their amphibian.  The teacher/parent could read aloud several of the poems, and have students pick out the language that catches their attention, or can make them visualize their amphibian!  

Haiku Pattern Template

Another possible idea is to combine the mini research project with a poem, so that they can produce their own Amphibian Acrobats!

Book cover of Ribbit! The Truth About Frogs

Ribbit! The Truth About Frogs by Annette Whipple

Do you know a student with burning questions about frogs, like how do they jump so high and why do some of them live underground? If so, then Annette Whipple’s Ribbit! The Truth About Frogs is a must for your home or classroom.  It would be great for a read-aloud, or for dipping into to answer some of those questions.  

Another great feature of this book is that Annette has prepared a textbook example of a Teacher Guide for a nonfiction guide.  It is a downloadable package with many treasures inside.  It includes activities for writing, reading, and STEM/STEAM activities; altogether, there are 8 ELA and 11 STEAM activities.  It also includes 4 printable items, including “Lifecycle of a Frog” and “Frog Facts”.   There are also some hands-on activities, such as origami frog math.  All in all, it is a great addition to the book itself, and teachers/librarians will enjoy having these ready-made activities available for their use!

Ribbit! The Truth About Frogs Teacher Guide 

Book cover of Amazing Amphibians

Amazing Amphibians: 30 Activities and Observations for Exploring Frogs, Toads, Salamanders and More by Lisa J. Amstutz

This is an amazing book, chock full of ideas to increase your knowledge of amphibians. It provides factual information, while also giving students many different ways to explore, including through art, cooking, in nature, games, writing, researching, and other hands-on STEM activities.  This would be great for many ages and educational settings, from preschool through at least middle school.  I think it would be useful for many settings, including schools, homeschools, and nature centers.  I’ve chosen a few to highlight below, with some additional sources.  However, there are step-by-step instructions for each activity in the book. It would make an excellent purchase for your personal library, or search for it in your school or town library.

Activity: Making a Frog/Toad Abode (Page 95)

Amphibians in general are at risk for habitat destruction, which can impact their life cycle.  One way that humans can help is to provide shelter and a safe habitat. One of the activities in Amazing Amphibians details how to build a “toad abode”, though it can obviously be for frogs as well.  It is on page 95, and it lists material requirements, as well as instructions on how to build it.  It is a hands-on activity, and would work for many ages, with some adaptations.  It could also be artistic, as some builders encourage decorating the “houses” with mosaic tile and other decorations.  Listed below are some videos that give examples and further instructions on how to build them.

How to Make a Toad/Frog Abode

Another Video: How to Make Toad Abode 

Activity: Making Faux Frog Eggs (Page 56)

A section of this book covers the frog life cycle, and many other books cover it as well. (I’ve provided a link to a Nat Geo Kids section on the Life Cycle of Frogs in the first section).  After they’ve gotten a general introduction, this activity of making “faux” frog eggs would be great for many ages.  

This activity uses water beads, water, and green food coloring.  I did locate another option (more earth-friendly) that used chia seeds, and included creating a whole mini habitat.  The video is attached below.  

Making Frog Eggs with Chia Seeds 

Final Suggestion: 

For kids who are truly interested in studying amphibians and reptiles, there is an online program that is coordinated by the Amphibian Foundation.  It includes “camps” for younger students and classes for amphibian pet owners.  There is a modest cost (see information below).

For older students who are interested in further training, there is a Junior Master Herpeologist Program, which is an 8-week online certification program for kids ages 12-14. 

There are other programs available; click on the link below for more information.

Amphibian Foundation: Online Training for Students