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The Secret Language of Stories (SLOS) by Carolee Dean

Hi everybody! Your long-time MUF member, Kimberley, here with today’s fantastic post!

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Author Carolee Dean

I’m thrilled to introduce you to The Secret Language of Stories, created by my good friend and writing/critique partner, Carolee Dean. As you will see below she has oodles of experience doing this in the public school system as well as in classes and workshops around the country. She’s a brilliant writer, teacher and story analyst, with a terrific plan of fun writing activities to do with your students based on the 12-step Hero’s Journey. If you’re a home-school parent, substitute teacher, or writer yourself – jump right in – and enjoy! LOTS more details at the links below. Take it away, Carolee . . .

OVERVIEW

The Secret Language of Stories (SLOS) is a twelve-step story analysis I created based upon The Hero with a Thousand Faces by Joseph Campbell as well as The Writers Journey: Mythic Structure for Writers by Christopher Vogler. Though I love both of these texts, I was looking for symbols a little more concrete for the students I work with, and terms that brought images easily to mind for them.

I use this method both to create my own novels and to teach writing to kids of all ages as well as adults. As a speech-language pathologist in the public schools, I serve students elementary through high school of all ability levels. Understanding the structure of narratives gives kids a framework not just for understanding the stories they hear and read, but also for telling the stories of their lives.

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SLOS is broken down into twelve basic parts. Stories don’t necessarily contain all of the components, and they don’t always occur in the order given here. In longer stories, many of the elements are repeated. Subplots may have their own story threads and novels may include endless repetitions of the Plan, Attempt, Response sequence found in the middle section of the story. The purpose of this analysis is not to micro analyze every element of a story, but rather to help students and other writers recognize what is going on in stories and to begin to think like authors.

I like to find magazine images depicting each of these story elements and then ask student to first talk about the pictures and then write sentences or paragraphs about them. Struggling writers may also be struggling speakers and thinkers. Since written language builds upon oral language, I always try to start with a conversation.

1)      Old World – Setting and characters are introduced.

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2)      Call and Response – This may occur during or after the inciting incident. The Hero receives a call to adventure. Sometimes he eagerly undertakes this challenge, but more often there is a period of reluctance or even refusal as the dangers of the adventure are weighed against possible benefits.

3)      Mentors, Guides, and Gifts – A mentor appears to encourage the hero to accept the challenge of the call and gifts are often given to help him on his way.

4)      Crossing – The hero decides to act and crosses over into the New World.

5)      New World – The hero faces small challenges as she learns to function in the New World.

6)      Problems, Prizes, and Plans – A clear story goal is established and the hero makes plans for how it will be attained.

7)      Midpoint Challenge: Going for the Prize – An attempt is made to attain the Prize. A shift in the story occurs.

8)      Downtime – This section shows the hero’s response to what happened during the attempt. It may be a time of celebration, recovery, healing, regrouping or sulking, depending on what happened during the attempt to attain the Prize.

(Note: In longer stories or novels, endless cycles of the plan, attempt, response sequencing continue to build momentum.)

9)      Chase – A twist sends the hero off in a new direction. Something is being pursued. The hero may be pursuing the prize or the villain, or the villain may be pursuing the hero.

10)   Death and Transformation –

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This is the point in the story where it appears that the hero will lose whatever is of highest value. Often someone dies at this point in the narrative.

11)   Showdown: The Final Test – The hero must face one final challenge to demonstrate whether the changes that have occurred are lasting or only temporary; internal or merely external.

12)   Reward –  The hero gets what she has earned. If she has passed the final test, it may be a reward. If not, there may be other consequences. Often there is a celebration and the return of the hero to the group.

This is a very brief overview of the twelve steps. For more information visit my blog at http://caroleedeanbooks.blogspot.com/ and check out the tab entitled The Secret Language of Stories. If you have questions or if you are interested in writing workshops for your staff or students, please feel free to contact me at my email (caroleedean@yahoo.com)

I also have a monthly column called The Secret Language of Stories focusing specifically on story analysis at SPELLBINDERS BOOK NEWS. To read my analysis of Cassandra Clare’s City of  Bones go to my April post at http://spellbindersbooknews.blogspot.com/2013/04/city-of-bones-story-analysis-by-carolee.html.

CAROLEE DEAN BIO: Carolee Dean has made numerous appearances as a guest poet/author at schools, libraries, poetry events, and teacher/librarian conferences. She holds a bachelor’s degree in music therapy, a master’s degree in communicative disorder and has spent over a decade working in the public schools as a speech-language pathologist.

Her first novel, Comfort (Houghton Mifflin), received an IRA notable citation. Take Me There (Simon Pulse) is a YALSA Quick Pick for Reluctant Readers. It follows the journey of a budding young poet who cannot read or write, but dreams of using words to escape a life of crime and deprivation. Forget Me Not (Simon Pulse) is a verse novel exploring suicide and the effects of cyber-bullying.

Follow her on Facebook at Carolee DeanM, Twitter @CaroleeJDean, www.caroleedean.com

Kimberley Griffiths Little is the author of three magical realism novels with Scholastic, THE HEALING SPELL, CIRCLE OF SECRETS, and WHEN THE BUTTERFLIES CAME (2013). Forthcoming: THE TIME OF THE FIREFLIES (Scholastic, 2014) and her Young Adult debut of FORBIDDEN with Harpercollins (Fall 2014). When she’s not writing you can find her reading/daydreaming in her Victorian cottage and eating chocolate chip cookies with a hit of Dr. Pepper.

The Year of Shadows by Claire Legrand!

About a year ago I had the privilege of interviewing Claire for her debut book, The Cavendish Home for Boys and Girls. Cavendish quickly became one of my favorite books, and Claire one of my new favorite authors! I was so excited when I had the opportunity to interview Claire this year, this time with a new book, The Year of Shadows. And yes, it is another favorite 🙂  The best part about the interview? Well, it’s got a little bit of everything for our wonderful readers here at The Mixed-Up Files! Read on to find out more!

 

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Olivia Stellatella is having a rough year.
Her mother left, her neglectful father — the maestro of a failing  orchestra — has moved her and her grandmother into his dark,  broken-down concert hall to save money, and her only friend is Igor, an  ornery stray cat.
Just when she thinks life couldn’t get any  weirder, she meets four ghosts who haunt the hall. They need Olivia’s  help — if the hall is torn down, they’ll be stuck as ghosts forever,  never able to move on.
Olivia has to do the impossible for her  shadowy new friends: Save the concert hall. But helping the dead has  powerful consequences for the living . . . and soon it’s not just the  concert hall that needs saving.

For the writers:

Amie:   The last time you were here you talked a bit about your inspiration for your first book, The Cavendish Home For Boys and Girls. What experiences did you draw upon for The Year of Shadows?

Claire: As I discussed at length on librarian Beth Shaum’s blog, I used to be a musician—and I loved it. It’s such a huge part of who I am that it influences all my writing. For example, in Cavendish, one of the main characters, Lawrence, is a pianist, and the protagonist, Victoria, often thinks about him and his music to help her get through some treacherous parts of the book. She even uses music to communicate with the Home itself. In The Year of Shadows, music plays a huge role: The story takes place at a symphony hall, and the main character’s father is an orchestra conductor. And Winterspell, my first YA novel due out next year, is a re-telling of the ballet The Nutcracker, and I’ve been obsessed with Tchaikovsky’s score from an early age. My experiences with music influence my work just by being a part of me, naturally bleeding into my writing.

Amie: Sounds like we have a lot in common as I’m also a musician!

Claire:  Also, while I was drafting and revising The Year of Shadows, my mom was going through some pretty brutal cancer treatments. Obviously, this was a huge ordeal for her, but it was also an ordeal for me and my brother. We experienced some heavy emotions during that time—anger, fear, sadness. A lot of that made its way into The Year of Shadows, especially in how Olivia processes her mom’s abandonment, her father’s neglect, and her relationships with the ghosts.

And that’s what The Year of Shadows is really about: family. The family related to you by blood, and the family you create for yourself in the people around you.

Amie:  As painful as your mother’s experience was for all of you, there was a lot of emotion in Year of Shadows and it’s obvious you used your situation to influence your writing.    Who was your favorite character to write about and why? (I just adored the cat, Igor, because the dialog he exchanges with Olivia is just how I’d imagine a cat would speak!)       

Claire: Igor was so fun to write! I must confess, though: I’m actually 100% a dog person. Shhh! Don’t tell Igor.

Amie: Ha! Me too. We love our fluffy little bichon 🙂

Claire:  Besides Igor, I of course loved writing Olivia because it was so easy to get inside her head. She and I are alike in a lot of ways: We both tend to withdraw in times of emotional turmoil, and we both have a darker side that, if we’re not careful, can drag us down into horrible places. Thankfully, we’re also alike in that we have great support networks around us, offering a helping hand even when we don’t think we want one.

Amie: I liked Olivia’s broody character a lot. I knew girls just like her in high school.  Olivia harbors a lot of hard feelings about her mom leaving. Do you think those feelings of anger propel her to make some of her choices with the ghosts? 

Claire: Yes, in that Olivia struggles with dark thoughts and feelings in the wake of her mother’s abandonment. That event sets off a whole series of catastrophic events that leave Olivia feeling lost, broken, confused, and alone. She is desperate for some kind of control, and when the ghosts show up, they represent an opportunity to do just that—control a piece of her otherwise uncontrollable world. Olivia says as much: “If I could make sense of ghosts, if I could solve that, I could solve anything. Maybe if I figured out where this one puzzle piece went, I could find the rest of them and somehow put my life back together.” (The Year of Shadows, pg. 61)

In addition, Olivia is especially fascinated with the Big Ideas of loss, death, and the afterlife. She hasn’t experienced these things, but in the wake of her mom leaving, she turns her thoughts in that rather morbid direction—drawing strange pictures and wearing dark clothes—because it helps her process the unsettling emotions her current circumstances have created. When the ghosts show up, learning about them, spending time with them, and helping them are the perfect macabre outlets for her sorrow.

Amie:   The Year of Shadows is your second book. Tell us how publishing your second book is different than your first.

Claire: The experiences were quite different, indeed. When I wrote Cavendish, it was with the hope, but not the knowledge, that it would be published. I wrote it quickly, sold it quickly, and it was in general a simpler story.

However, when I wrote The Year of Shadows, I knew that it would be published, and that added something new to the mix: fear. I felt a pressure (totally self-inflicted, by the way) that I hadn’t felt when writing Cavendish. I knew that people would be watching me this time, waiting, and wondering: “Will this be any good? Or is she a one-trick pony?” This anxiety didn’t affect the final product, but it certainly affected how I worked. In addition, The Year of Shadows is a more complex book—emotionally and structurally—so that was intimidating as well.

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Claire Legrand used to be a musician until she realized she couldn’t stop thinking about the stories in her head. Now a writer, Ms. Legrand can often be found typing with purpose at her keyboard, losing herself in the stacks at her local library, or embarking upon spontaneous adventures to lands unknown. Her first novel is THE CAVENDISH HOME FOR BOYS AND GIRLS, a New York Public Library Best Book for Children in 2012. Her second novel, THE YEAR OF SHADOWS, releases August 27, 2013, with her third novel, WINTERSPELL, to follow in fall 2014. She is one of the four authors behind THE CABINET OF CURIOSITIES, an anthology of dark middle grade fiction due out in July 2014 from Greenwillow Books/HarperCollins. Claire lives in New Jersey with a dragon and two cats. Visit her at claire-legrand.com and at enterthecabinet.com.
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On a positive note, while I don’t think any author ever truly knows what he or she is doing all the time—there is always much to learn about the publishing industry—I felt, in a way, more confident this time around, even as I fretted about the dreaded “sophomore slump” syndrome. That confidence came from the friends I had made in the industry and the knowledge I had learned over the course of the first book’s publication. Although every book is different, and no two publishing experiences are the same, I believe that with each book comes a greater overall authorial strength. Each “book baby” helps you learn your craft more intimately and gain a better understanding of the industry. (Although, as I said: There’s always more to learn!)

For the teachers/librarians:

Amie:  Olivia allows the ghosts who occupy Emerson Hall to possess her body.  How do you think readers will react to that? Do you feel like you pushed the envelope with this plot point (either in a good way or a bad one)?

Claire: What a great question! And you know, the funny thing is, I never thought twice about the possession element. I guess that shows you how my brain works, mwahaha. 😉

In all seriousness, although no one during the drafting, revision, and production processes expressed concern at this plot point, I can see how it could be considered “pushing the envelope.” Olivia and Henry do indeed allow ghosts to possess their minds. The ghosts use the kids’ minds to relive their last moments and uncover what the ghosts’ anchors are. The idea of letting another being inhabit your mind is a troubling one. Not to mention the fact that the possession leaves Olivia and Henry with some pretty intense side effects—nausea, exhaustion, emotional fragility, mental stress. And not to mention the fact that, during possession, Olivia and Henry experience death—albeit someone else’s.

Although I wasn’t concerned about these plot points specifically, I’m always mindful of my audience when writing middle grade novels, and I try to write about intense topics in a way young readers can process without too much trouble. I’m also always mindful of the fact that young readers are, plain and simple, incredibly smart. Over the course of my career so far, they’ve asked me insightful questions and displayed tremendous maturity. So, while I do try to write these scarier scenes with a certain degree of discretion and tenderness (yes, tenderness, even in a scary scene!), I’m also confident that my young readers will process these scenes with intelligence and thoughtfulness.

And, one final note: I think the possession scenes, and the ghosts’ memories scenes, would be great ones for teachers and librarians to discuss with their students! They present some interesting questions about identity, sacrifice, and death itself.

Amie: I agree completely. I loved the possession scenes for precisely the reasons you describe. Self identity, sacrifice and even death are difficult for children to experience, but you’ve done a great job of touching on these themes in a sensitive way.   I’ve compared Cavendish to Coraline. What would you consider to be some book comps for Year of Shadows?

Claire: Oh goodness, I’m terrible with comp titles! (Shameful, considering I was a librarian, albeit briefly.) I would say that the classic ghost stories by Betty Ren Wright and Mary Downing Hahn (The Dollhouse Murders, Wait Til Helen Comes) would be great readalikes, as well as Lauren Oliver’s Liesl & Po, another book that talks about death and loss. I would also recommend The Year of Shadows to fans of the lyrical, lovely Breadcrumbs by the even lovelier Anne Ursu (who, as it happens, blurbed The Year of Shadows!). Both books address issues of family, friendship, and feeling like an outsider.

For the parents:

Amie:  Many families experience similar situations to Olivia and her dad (homelessness, divorce/separation, etc.) Do you have any advice on how parents can talk to their kids about these situations so they don’t have to suffer in silence like Olivia?

Claire:  Another great question! You’re just chock full of them, Amie. 😉

Amie: They don’t call me the interview queen for nuttin! 😉

Claire: I’m not a parent myself, so it feels a bit disingenuous to offer advice to them, but I will say this, hearkening back to my earlier answer: Kids are so unbelievably smart. They are curious and they want to know. Withholding important information from them—reasons why a certain thing is happening, the cause of someone’s behavior, how you as a parent are feeling and the problems you are facing—can, I think, do more harm than good.

The Maestro withholds information from Olivia—the true financial circumstances of their family and of the orchestra, his thought process behind selling their home and moving them into Emerson Hall, why he and his wife fought so much in the months leading up to her leaving. He distances himself from Olivia in every way imaginable. He hardly sees her. What Olivia doesn’t at first realize is that he’s doing this because he thinks it will protect her. Better for her to hate him, he thinks, better to see him as this unreachable, formidable figure, than to see him at his most vulnerable. Better to not talk to her at all than open himself up to her and tell her the truth. He is afraid of his daughter—perhaps of how he will see himself through her eyes, and that he won’t like what he sees. So he ignores her instead.

This failure to communicate lies at the root of many relationship problems, but I think between parents and children, non-communication often stems from, on the parent’s side, a misguided determination to protect the child from difficult issues. There is some wisdom in that—but only to a point. There is also much potential danger in such a disconnect, evidenced in Olivia and the Maestro’s relationship. If he had sat her down from the beginning, answered her questions, not shrunk away from her accusations but accepted them and apologized; if he had explained to her what was happening, if he had given her the chance to see him, much of their trouble could have been avoided.

But then we wouldn’t have a story. 😉

For the readers:

Amie:   I love how your books have strong female characters – why do you think that’s important for middle grade girls?

Claire: Middle grade girls are at that brief, strange point between childhood and adolescence, rife with transformation. They feel a lot of things during this transition—new things, scary things. They become exposed to a wider world and might experience any number of unfamiliar emotions in response. At this age, they become acutely aware of how they should look, how they should act, how they should dress, what they should feel, who they should like, what they should believe. There is a lot of should in a middle grade girl’s world. With that in mind, I like to write about girls who experience these feelings of should—Should I really be so angry? Should I swallow my anger at my father and just play nice?—and work past them to feelings of am. I am angry. I am lonely. I am unique. And that unique is not always palatable or tidy, but it is me, and I’m starting to become okay with that. That’s an invaluable concept, especially for girls at that vulnerable age.

Amie:  I agree – it’s a fun and exciting time for these girls, which some approach with trepidation. It’s good for girls in this group to relate to someone, even characters in a book! Although Olivia is awesome in her own right, I felt like the unsung heros in The Year of Shadows were Mr. Worthington, Tillie, Jax and Frederick – the ghosts. Oh and of course, Henry. Tell me about your favorite hero in YOS and why.

Claire: Oh, I love this question! You bring up a great point that the protagonist of a story is not that story’s only hero. Often a story is peppered with heroes who may or may not get their chance in the spotlight. My favorite hero in The Year of Shadows is probably Mr. Worthington. He’s a fragile, reticent ghost, probably the most bizarre of the four, and may seem like a strange choice. But consider this: Even though he is literally falling apart due to his ghostly age, in danger of being pulled into Limbo at any moment, Mr. Worthington insists the other ghosts be helped first. He watches over Olivia like the father she needs and desperately misses. And, when we learn about Mr. Worthington’s past, we see him demonstrate a similar selflessness for a loved one—even though, again, it puts his own life at risk.

I just adored writing him, even though he doesn’t speak much. I love his fedora and business suit. I love his strange, wordless noises. I love how he creeps everyone out—but they love him anyway. I love how he loves Olivia like she is his own. In short: Mr. Worthington FTW!

Amie: Agreed!   I felt like there were multiple villains (some intentional, others coincidental)—Olivia’s dad (the Maestro), Olivia’s mom, and the Shades. How was it to write multiple villains, trying to keep them in perspective not only to the reader but also to the characters in the story?

Claire: Interesting that you would count Olivia’s mom as one of the villains! And I agree with you on that point. After all, she left her daughter without a good-bye or any explanation, and though Olivia misses her mother deeply, that abandonment stings like an actual wound.

It was a challenge, weaving together the multiple storylines of The Year of Shadows. We have Olivia’s relationship with her father, her relationship with Henry, her trouble at school, saving the ghosts, saving the Hall, fighting the shades that haunt the Hall, the mystery of why Olivia’s mom left and where she is now—it’s a lot to juggle! But by keeping the focus on Olivia—always, Olivia—and crafting each storyline and villain so that by experiencing and conquering them, Olivia learned something about herself, I was able to keep the conflicts and stakes clear. Various storylines and villains took precedence when they needed to for that particular segment of Olivia’s development. I did keep in mind that the main villain here is really the Maestro (although his villainy is complex, and he is ultimately a sympathetic character), and I traced all other conflicts back to the main conflict between him and Olivia. They are the nucleus of this story.

Amie: Thanks for sharing a little about the crafting of your novel, Claire! It was great to have you back at The Mixed-Up Files. I’ve got my fingers crossed for another great book from you!

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Amie Borst is the co-author of Cinderskella, a twisted retelling of a fairy tale classic, debuting October 26th, 2013! She writes with her 13 year old daughter and they can be found on facebook and Amie’s blog

 

Aces Wild by Erica Perl

Zelly Fried has finally convinced her parents to let her get a dog, with the help of her grandfather Ace. Unfortunately, said dog (also named Ace) is a shoe-chewing, mud-tracking, floor-peeing kind of dog. Despite Zelly’s best efforts to drag Ace (literally!) to puppy kindergarten, his flunking report card says it all: “This Ace is wild.”
Also wild is the other Ace in Zelly’s life. Grandpa Ace has decided to begin dating again and is dining and dancing every night, against his doctor’s orders. Determined to get both Aces under control, Zelly enlists the help of her two best friends, Allison and Jeremy (despite the fact that they don’t quite see eye to eye). They need to come up with a plan, fast. But how? It’s not like either Ace ever does what he’s told.

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Me: Hi Erica! *Waves* Welcome aboard the Mixed-Up Files. Why don’t you tell us what inspired you to write ACES WILD?

Erica: When I wrote WHEN LIFE GIVES YOU O.J., my main inspiration for the character of Ace (the grandpa) was my grandfather, Alan Perl.  When I returned to write another book about Ace and Zelly, I immediately thought about what Grandpa Alan did after my grandmother died – he started dating up a storm.  I now see that this was how he coped with being lonely and missing her, but at the time it seemed disrespectful to her memory… in addition to being just plain weird!  I also knew from experience that getting a puppy creates a new level of household chaos, so I loved the idea of seeing what would happen with a crazy, out-of-control (yet loveable) puppy going head-to-head with a crazy, out-of-control (yet loveable) grandpa.  And since Zelly had named her puppy “Ace” at the end of WHEN LIFE GIVES YOU O.J., the title ACES WILD was a perfect fit.

Me: That does sound like quite a perfect fit. Do you have a crazy, out-of-control (yet loveable) writing routine?

Erica:  For me, the hardest thing about being a writer is finding time to write.  I have a full time job that I love (at www.firstbook.org) but it means I have to find writing time around my work schedule.  I do my best writing early in the morning, because my inner censor is not awake yet.  So I usually get up, pour myself a cup of coffee and write until I have to stop and go to work, or – on the weekends – my kids get up.  If I’m lucky on the weekends or evenings, I find time to come back to what I’m writing and work some more.  When I have something ready to edit, I print it out, read it aloud, and edit it longhand.  I also carry a notebook and write down ideas and snippets and doodles wherever I go – on the subway, etc. – so later I can perhaps use them in something or see where they take me.  And if I’m somehow without my notebook, I use the recording function of my phone to memorialize ideas.  That way when I sit down to write, I have stuff to work with.

Me: I get strange looks from neighbors when I use the recording function on my phone. Oops! Did I say that out loud? Soooo…. would you rather be with your main character in a 50 foot well or a football field surrounded by zombies? (I like zombies – it’s kind of an obsession)

Erica: Hmm… tough one.  Zombies don’t run very fast, but then again neither does Ace-the-grandpa.  And Ace-the-dog would probably try to give the zombies doggie kisses, which is never a good idea.  So, I guess I’m going to go with the 50 foot well.  If we’re stuck there a long time, Zelly, Ace and Ace will definitely keep me entertained.

Me: Are you crazy? There’s blood-sucking, soul-draining monsters in those wells! All right, maybe you can answer this one correctly.  Peanut butter or jelly? Sardines or crackers? Careful. Your life depends on it.

Erica: This one’s easy.  Nutella on whole wheat toast.

Me: 50 points! Thanks for the riding the MUF boat today. (Get it, Love boat, MUF boat? Ah…nevermind.)

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 ERICA S. PERL is the author of When Life Gives You OJ, Vintage Veronica, and a number of picture books, including the well-loved Chicken Butt. A crowd-pleasing presenter to children of all ages, she has also done author visits at schools and libraries across the United States. In addition to writing books, Erica works at First Book, the groundbreaking nonprofit organization that has provided over 70 million brand-new books to children in need. Learn more about Erica and her books at www.EricaPerl.com. Follow her on Twitter and Facebook.

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Amie Borst doesn’t have a crazy, out-of-control anything in her house, but she does write about characters with those traits. Her first book, Cinderskella, co-authored by her middle-grade daughter, Bethanie, debuts October 26th, 2013. You can find her on facebook, twitter and her blog