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Are You a Plotter or a Pantser?

When I first started writing middle grade novels, I was a total pantser. I’d get an idea, mull it around for a bit, jot down some notes, then plunge in without really having an idea where my story would go. It was a fun ride full of surprises, and I enjoyed every minute of it. I loved how my characters took over the story once I got to know them better, and couldn’t wait to see how they’d get out of all the situations they stumbled into. I was amazed at the gems that popped up! But then I realized how much muck I had to dig through. I didn’t have a full story arc. It was more like the fast ups, downs, twists, turns, and upside-down loops of a roller coaster. I’ve lost count of how many major rounds of revisions it took to turn my roller coaster rides into fully fleshed out story arcs.

roller coaster

I thought about outlining. For a minute. It felt too restricting. I didn’t want to know all the major details about my stories in advance. But I also wanted to have stronger structures to my novels. So now, I’m somewhere between a plotter and a pantser.

Before leaping into a new novel, I still do my typical brainstorming (which can last for a brief period of time to several months or even longer if I’m working on another project but can’t get ideas for a new one out of my head). I jot down any possibilities that hit and cross out ones that don’t look like they’ll work. But now I’ve added or enhanced a lot of other techniques, too.

  • My character sketches are much more in depth. I used to jot down a few ideas, then change a lot of it as I wrote and got to know my characters better. It feels strange trying to know so much about my characters before diving into their stories (especially after finishing a novel where I know my characters inside and out), but the more I brainstorm the story and work on the overall plot ahead of time, the more my initial character sketches work throughout the book (although it’s rare that I don’t make at least a few tweaks along the way). It’s way more than just a brief physical description and a few facts and traits now. I fill out character questionnaires, interview them, etc. One of my favorite questions is: what’s your biggest secret or fear? It’s great knowing what my character’s flaws are, and how they’ll be tested throughout their journey. Newest Plot Clock 2016
  • I love using Joyce Sweeney’s Plot Clock before writing a novel. It’s such a fantastic tool! It helps me get the bones down without feeling shackled to an outline. If you’d like, you can take a peek at some notes I shared a few years ago after taking Joyce’s Plot Clock Workshop, or you can sign up for Joyce’s newsletter then log in to her site to watch her free hour and a half Plot Clock webinar.
  • I saw agent Jill Corcoran state on social media that it’s helpful to have a pitch ready before you start writing a new book. What a brilliant idea! Not only does it help focus you, but you can also check to see if the concept seems strong enough for the market, and alter it if you need to before writing a single word of your manuscript.
  • During an SCBWI workshop, Lorin Oberweger said something that will always stick with me—know what your character wants before the story begins. I’ve looked back at past novels with this in mind, and figure this out before starting any new projects now.

Are you a plotter, a pantser, or somewhere in between, like me? What tools work best for the structure of your novels—and where do you struggle the most? In case you can’t tell, plotting is something I’ve had to study a lot, because it was one of my weaknesses. Joyce Sweeney once told me that plotting was one of her weaknesses, too—but she studied it so much that she was able to develop the Plot Clock and turn plotting into one of her biggest strengths. That’s so encouraging! I’m always looking for new tools to help me, and love seeing how much stronger my plotting is thanks to them.

Mindy Alyse Weiss writes humorous middle grade novels with heart and quirky picture books. She’s constantly inspired by her two daughters, an adventurous Bullmasador adopted from The Humane Society, and an adorable Beagle/Pointer mix who was rescued from the Everglades. Visit Mindy’s TwitterFacebook, or blog to read more about her writing life, conference experiences, and writing tips.

Nana!

The universe works in profound and mysterious ways. I was waiting for the birth of my first grandchild when the announcement came that this year’s Newbery Medal went to a picture book about a boy and his Nana taking a long bus ride. I’d already been thinking I might want to be called Nana, and “Last Stop on Market Street” made up my mind for sure. The book’s wise, wry grandmother is all about finding beauty in the least likely places. She’s a beacon of love and empathy, and her grandson swims in her light. I had my role model, for sure.

last stop on

This all got me thinking about how many wonderful books we have about what grandparents can mean in kids’ lives. Here are just a few.

in my grandmother's house

From Amazon: In this unique collection, twelve of today’s most acclaimed children’s book authors take us on a journey to the grandmothers’ houses of their memories. Some of the stories are sweetly nostalgic. Others are heartbreaking stories of difficult, or even absent, grandmothers. But each celebrates the sometimes warm, sometimes tense, always special relationship between grandmothers and their granddaughters.

thing about luckFrom Indiebound: The winner of the National Book Award for Young People’s Literature, from Newbery Medalist Cynthia Kadohata.  Summer knows that “kouun” means good luck in Japanese, and this year her family has none of it. Just when she thinks nothing else can possibly go wrong, an emergency whisks her parents away to Japan right before harvest season. Summer and her little brother, Jaz, are left in the care of their grandparents, who come out of retirement in order to harvest wheat and help pay the bills.
Obaachan and Jiichan  are old-fashioned and demanding, and Summer inevitably disappoints them. Just when she hopes the bad luck is finished, things get much worse.  And when that happens, Summer has to figure out how to change it herself, even if it means further displeasing Obaachan.

one crazy summerFrom Tricia: This is the first in a three-book series destined to become a classic. Big Ma is one of my favorite characters in all of kid lit! While I don’t especially want to be like her, I recognize that her love and concern for her granddaughters know no bounds, and they are who they are in large part because of her.

hour of the beesFrom Indiebound: “What does it mean to be fully alive? Magic blends with reality in this coming-of-age novel about a girl, a grandfather, wanderlust, and reclaiming your roots.
While her friends are spending their summers having pool parties and sleepovers, twelve-year-old Carolina — Carol — is spending hers in the middle of the New Mexico desert, helping her parents move the grandfather she’s never met into a home for people with dementia. At first, Carol avoids prickly Grandpa Serge. But as the summer wears on and the heat bears down, Carol finds herself drawn to him, fascinated by the crazy stories he tells her about a healing tree, a green-glass lake, and the bees that will bring back the rain and end a hundred years of drought. As the thin line between magic and reality starts to blur, Carol must decide for herself what is possible — and what it means to be true to her roots.

listen slowlyFrom Indiebound: A California girl born and raised, Mai can’t wait to spend her vacation at the beach. Instead, she has to travel to Vietnam with her grandmother, who is going back to find out what really happened to her husband during the Vietnam War. Mai’s parents think this trip will be a great opportunity for their out-of-touch daughter to learn more about her culture. But to Mai, those are their roots, not her own. Vietnam is hot, smelly, and the last place she wants to be. Besides barely speaking the language, she doesn’t know the geography, the local customs, or even her distant relatives. To survive her trip, Mai must find a balance between her two completely different worlds.

cody 2 coverYes, I confess, this one’s by me! And just happens to be dedicated to my grandbaby’s parents! It publishes in a few days, and features a Michael- Jackson-loving, tai-chai-practicing granny who just might be based on a few people I happen to know. Cody adores GG, of course! This is  the second book in my CODY series, continuing the adventures of  irrepressible Cody and deep-thinking best friend Spencer. As they tangle with the Meen Family next door, Cody puzzles over friendship, how to be patient, the baton of love, and other mysteries in a funny, cozy story set in a lively, diverse neighborhood. Once again illustrated by that genius, Eliza Wheeler! (April 12, Candlewick)

So many books I didn’t mention here (the wonderful “The Evolution of Calpurnia Tate” and its sequel, for starters). Please add your own favorite books/ grandparent memories below!