Editor / Agent Spotlight

How to Find a Great Agent

Me and my amazing agent, Joyce Sweeney.

I’m so grateful for my incredible agent, and hope this post will help you connect with an amazing agent, too. But please keep in mind that not having an agent is better than a bad agent. Research agents before submitting (there are some horrible schmagents out there who could hurt your career vs. helping it). Writer Beware gives great tips for avoiding bad agents.

Ways to Research Agents

  • We have Agent/Editor Spotlights that give insight on them (and sometimes include a giveaway or private pitch party).
  • QueryTracker is an amazing tool! The free version is great, but it’s worth paying a small annual amount in order to have extra tools that make it even easier to research and stalk (um, I mean keep up with) agent response times. Tip: Sign up for their free newsletter so you receive e-mail notifications of new agents or changes for existing agents.
  • Literary Rambles has great interviews, and you can look up agents by MG and other categories.
  • Publishers Marketplace is a fantastic resource for seeing sales similar to what you write, and you can see who both the agent and editor are.
  • If you read a book that has similarities to your style or topics (but not too similar) you can look for an agent’s name in the acknowledgements.
  • Conferences and workshops are a great way to learn from agents—and get an idea of what it might be like to work with them. Some great places to take them are SCBWI, Highlights Foundation, and The Writing Barn.

 

WAIT! Don’t Send Queries Yet

Before you start querying, make sure you’re 100% ready. You only have one chance to make a first impression.

  • Read, read, read, then read even more recent books in your genre (and it’s great to read other genres as well).
  • Write, revise, get feedback…repeat, repeat, repeat! So many writers query too early (I was guilty of that early on, too).
  • Find at least one awesome critique group with others who also write middle-grade novels. I personally find it helpful to run middle grade novels through a group a few chapters at a time. Once the entire MG is as strong as I can get it, critique swaps for the full manuscript are a huge help.
  • When your manuscript as polished as possible, consider getting a professional critique. Feedback from successful authors can be really helpful. I also loved getting critiques from agents (and now that I’m agented, I seek out editor critiques before submitting, if possible). Where can you get paid agent critiques? Here are a few places that come to mind: SCBWI events often offer them for an additional price, The Manuscript Academy, and Inked Voices offers workshops with peer and agent feedback.

 

Don’t Forget to Polish Your Query

After spending tons of time making a novel shine, some writers quick draft a query and send, send, send. NO! Please don’t do that. Take the time to write, revise, then get feedback on your query and make sure it’s polished before sending to agents. That’s your first impression—make sure it’s a great one. Also, it’s good to only send 5 – 10 queries at a time to see how well they do. Plus, you might receive feedback you’d like to use before sending the next round of queries.

  • Study book blurbs to see what makes you want to dive into a book (or put it down and run away).
  • Read these amazing query tips at Kidlit 411. This site is full of great advice. How to write a query, submission errors to avoid, comps, queries that worked, etc. Tip: Check out the rest of the Kidlit 411 website, too. There’s a whole section on middle grade novels…and so much more.
  • You can also check out amazing queries in the PBParty Showcase. They’re for picture books, but you can still see what makes a query professional. The 2025 showcase won’t be available on my website until March 10, but here’s a link to the 2024 showcase, which still has most of the queries up (thanks amazing finalists for allowing others to learn from your incredible entries). Tip: Look at the impact the inspiration and connection to the story both have. Many writers forget to include a bit of that in a query–and it can make a huge difference! For the contest, I created a separate area for it, but as you look through great query examples here and other places, consider how those connections make you feel. Then tap into yours and make sure it shines through your query.

 

I’m sending tons of good luck vibes and fairy dust your way, and hope you’ll have an amazing agent soon!

Do you have agent tips and resources to share?

 

EDITOR SPOTLIGHT: Taylor Norman of Neal Porter Books / Holiday House

We are thrilled to welcome Taylor Norman to the Editor/Agent Spotlight on The Mixed-up Files of Middle Grade Authors today.

Headshot of Editor Taylor Norman

Taylor Norman

Taylor Norman is Editorial Director of Neal Porter Books. NPB has recently ventured into publishing middle grade novels with the release of Scattergood by H.M.Bouwman. NPB picture books, edited by Taylor Norman, include Tumblebaby by Adam Rex/ illustrated by Audrey Helen Weber, and The Table by Winsome Bingham & Wiley Bevins /illustrated by Jason Griffin.

Prior to joining Neal Porter Books, Taylor spent 11 years at Chronicle Books, where her projects included Everything You Need for a Treehouse by Carter Higgins/illustrated by Emily Hughes, Nina LaCour’s 2023 Lambda Award-winning The Apartment House on Poppy Hill, and Shawn Harris’s 2022 Caldecott Honor book, Have You Ever Seen a Flower?

We are excited to hear all about her newest publishing path, editing and acquiring middle grade at Neal Porter Books. But first. . .

The Backstory

According to your website, thirteen-year-old Taylor had already decided she wanted to work in children’s publishing. Now that you’re living that dream job, in what ways does having grown up around booksellers (shoutout to Copperfield’s) continue to inform or influence your perspective as a children’s book editor? Also, what would you tell other thirteen-year-olds who might want to follow in your footsteps?

Oh, absolutely! Not only did I spend my high school years as a bookseller at Copperfield’s Books in Petaluma, California, my mom, Patty Norman, is the children’s events director there still. Her stories about any given day at the bookstore are my best contemporary research into what’s resonating with what kids (and parents and teachers). And I keep at the forefront of my mind my own experiences as a children’s bookseller. So much of the bookseller’s job is intuiting what a kid both wants and needs, and what book will unlock that feeling.

Most of us, whether kids or adults, aren’t very articulate about what we need or feel, so as a bookseller, or an editor, or a fellow person, you have to get good at reading between the lines, so to speak. The flood of success that came over me when I knew I’d found the just-right book for that extra-challenging kid—either someone who’d read everything or someone who was determined not to read anything—is the feeling I seek to give booksellers and parents with every book I publish: knowledge that buying this book for — or handing this book to — a kid will unlock something in its reader. Of course, I hope that the books I work on reach tons of kids, each in their own way—but I am anxious especially to publish books that might be the only book to reach a particular kid. To find those books I really channel everything I learned and remember from being a bookseller.

To other young people who want to be editors. . .

The biggest thing to consider is not just your ability to be a good reader—you know you are that—or why a book is successful—you will get good at articulating your reactions to a text. The biggest thing to know about this job is that it is all about helping a book become its best self. I feel more like a translator than anything else—it’s my job to figure out what an author is envisioning in their head, help that vision arrive on the page as close to its ideal version as possible, and then make sure the idea translates to another reader. It’s a funny act of intimacy between you and the author, and a simultaneous awareness of (and hope for) tens of thousands of future readers.

I don’t remember learning or thinking about the importance of the author relationship when I was a teenager planning to do this job, though it wouldn’t have turned me away—I love the collaborative partnership of editing as much as the work itself. But you have to have patience and a knack for figuring a person out, and while that aspect of the job is the biggest part of my every single day, it’s not immediately apparent in the abstract.

The Move to Middle Grade

What precipitated the decision to venture into middle grade novels at Neal Porter Books, and do you have a specific vision or criteria for this new list for middle grade readers? Historical fiction only? Character-driven stories? Will there be a specific number of MG books per year? (Asking for a LOT of “Mixed-Up” MG author friends here—haha.)

I always wanted to be a fiction editor and can’t conceive of a role I’d ever have in publishing that wouldn’t involve working on novels. Exactly what unites all the novels I work on is a bit harder to define. I don’t look for trends or types of books; I’m as susceptible to historical fiction as I am speculative fiction. It’s all dependent on the success of the writing.

I am extremely focused on high-quality writing and originality of voice, and the second I read a line in a book that sounds like something I’ve read before, my interest starts to wane. That said, writing “voicey” for the sake of standing out doesn’t work for me either—you can feel the effort behind it. Authenticity—which is to say, an authentically unique mind and way of both seeing the world and representing that world— is, then, what I’m after.

Searching for manuscripts by this requirement, I have to say, cuts out a lot of submissions. So there will be between 3-5 books for older readers every year; a mix of prose and graphic, and a mix of early readers, chapter books, and middle grade.

cover of the middle grade novel Scattergood.

More about Scattergood 

Congratulations on the publication of Scattergood by H.M. Bouwman, which released January 21st. How did you initially discover Bouwman’s manuscript, what made you want to acquire it, and were there many revisions from acquisitions to final draft?

Oh goodness! Heather and I have been on such a journey together. I first read Scattergood in 2013, I believe. I was an editorial assistant or assistant editor at the time. I absolutely fell in love with the book—it was the epitome of the novels I wanted to publish—but I wasn’t allowed to work on novels at the time, being so junior. I reluctantly let the agent know I was passing, but the book never left my mind. I found myself flashing on thoughts about it every few months, for the next ten years!

When I came to Neal Porter Books and was looking for the first novels for our list, back again came Scattergood into my head—the one that got away. But when I googled it, nothing came up. I wrote the agent, Tricia Lawrence, and she let me know she’d never sold the book! I reread it and was thrilled to see that the book was even better than I’d remembered. Coincidentally, as I was rereading it, I happened to run literally into the author, Heather, at NCTE—she was leaning on a table as I was walking by, which was a very odd experience—I had literally been reading the book on the plane to the conference and then there she was, its author. It was all very akin to one of us conjuring the other.

Anyway, as you can predict by now, I bought the book and Heather and I worked very closely on it, which were more acts of tightening and strengthening than any tectonic edits. Heather is an exceptional, transporting, emotionally deft writer, and I am as struck now, on my 30th read of the book, as I was over a decade ago.

Scattergood still epitomizes the novels I love most, the novels I think are most meaningful for kids: It’s a book that understands how hard it is to be young and a person figuring out how to be alive in the world; it’s a book that does not shy from showing its characters make tragic, awful, yet understandable mistakes—and have to contend with the ramifications thereof. It is a book that reminds us of the humanity and fallibility of all people, no matter who or when. And, it’s at once very exciting and propulsive, and wrenchingly authentic. That is, it doesn’t sacrifice plot for quality. The New York Times called the book “brave, beautiful,” “wise and heartbreaking” and also “shocking” and “blindsid[ing]” which I think confirms this unusual combination of traits. I am obviously biased, but I think Heather’s book is an absolute masterpiece. I am so excited for everyone to read it.

On Characters and Covers

What makes you want to root for a character from the beginning? If possible, can you give us an example from Scattergood?

I don’t need much to root for a character—just a grounding in their reality. I love plenty of books where I don’t like the character but root for them anyway, or root against the character while finding them lovable. There are a lot of different ways to make a main character compelling, and that’s more important to me than whether or how I root for them.

Can you tell us about the cover of Scattergood, minus any spoilers?

It’s extremely important to me that each book we publish looks as specific as its story is. The reality is that we all judge books by their covers, and the more trends a cover abides by, the less it catches a reader’s eye. Each novel on our list stands out not just from other middle grade novels, but from books for all ages. So there was no question in my mind, when we started thinking about the cover of Scattergood, that Angie Kang was the right artist. I knew Angie from our shared time at Chronicle Books, and the books we’d worked on together as editor/designer were among the most fulfilling novels I’ve ever watched come to life.

Subsequently, I’d read (and, devastatingly, lost!) Angie’s debut picture book, a work of absolute genius that comes out in March from Kokila, Our Lake. I was so impressed by Angie’s art, of course, but also the subtlety and power of her storytelling, the immense respect she had for her young reader, and her understanding and memory of what it felt like to be a kid. As soon as I read that book, I became determined to work with her in whatever capacity I could.

She thankfully said yes to the Scattergood project and proceeded to deliver about a dozen equally incredible options. Readers of the book will notice the many symbolic touches to the cover design, but young kids walking by without any idea of the book’s contents will be struck immediately by its beauty, intrigue, and specificity. We are very grateful to Angie for putting her unparalleled skill to work on behalf of Peggy and Scattergood.

BONUS: Editor Speed Dating

  1. Query/Pitch pet peeve: I really don’t like when agents reduce a book to its trendy genre (SEL, for example)—and like even less when the book is described via its trope—friends-to-lovers, chosen-one, etc. There are plenty of viable houses for books that adhere to a set of rigid expectations, but if a book can be described easily and familiarly, it is likely not one I’m going to respond to. If agents are sending artists to consider, please include images of the art in the email rather than (or in addition to) links. If all I see are agent pitch + links, I am unlikely to click through to see visuals.
  2. Please don’t send me anything spooky. I just don’t fall for that kind of thing.
  3. PB you could recite by heart: Jamberry by Bruce Degen, A Very Special House by Ruth Krauss, Two Little Trains by Margaret Wise Brown, Parade by Donald Crews
  4. Affirmation for 2025: One of my current favorite fictional characters is Doctor DeSoto’s wife, Mrs. DeSoto, in William Steig’s genius picture book. Mrs. DeSoto, who readers of the book will agree is the story’s actual hero, chooses a crucial moment in the plot to decide: “Let’s risk it.” I’m gonna go with that.

Endless thanks for joining on the Mixed-up blog today, Taylor.

Let’s ALL risk it, shall we?

Congratulations to Taylor Norman on her promotion to Editorial Director of Neal Porter Books!

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Agent Spotlight: Stacey Graham

Today, we spotlight Super Agent, Stacey Graham, of 3Seas Literary. She’s smart, kind, and funny! (She’s also my agent.) Stacey’s also an author, and she brings that experience to support her clients through the many ups and downs of writing and publishing. Take a look and see if she might be a perfect fit for you and your manuscript.

Please tell us about your path to becoming an agent.

I backed into a writing career on a whim and agenting even more so. My fifth child was two years old (so plenty of me time on my hands) and wandered into the Absolute Write forums where I befriended a large group of people who taught me about writing, getting published, and were—and still are—a huge support system. A few years later, I had four book deals in two years and decided that writing was more exhausting than raising five children—though looking back, it could have been a combination of the two. I floated the idea of becoming an agent to my agent because I wanted to learn more about the business and she hired me immediately before I could back out.

How does being a writer influence your job as an agent?

As a traditionally published author, I hope to give my clients perspective on both sides of the business. As a writer, I’m there to help editorially and discuss ideas and as an agent, I guide them through contracts, marketing, future projects, give advice on opportunities, send encouragement, and a lot more. By having been on both sides, I see the struggle and the reward and know what it’s like when a project you love doesn’t connect with editors in the way you had worked toward or get even more excited when a deal is offered.

What is your least favorite part of your job as an agent?

Turning down amazing projects because I know I’m not the right agent to represent it. I always want what’s best for the writer and their career, and sometimes another agent with more experience in that area would make a better partner.

What is your favorite part of your job as an agent?

Helping a writer be happy with where they are in the process toward publication; sharing an offer with a client; seeing their book on billboards in New York City. (All of which has happened.)

What do you love about MG novels?

Curiosity drives the novels—the characters want to know why and they’ll do anything to find out. Couple that with the natural humor MG writers bring to their work and I’m sold. That and the fart jokes. What is it with you people and fart jokes?

Did you have a favorite MG novel as a kid?

Anything by Judy Blume.

What are your pet peeves in a query letter?

Not following submission guidelines. A query letter can tell an agent a lot about a writer: if they pay attention to details and how well they’d work with an editor, if the book falls under our representative categories or if a writer is shotgunning a query to anyone on a list they found online, and if the writer has researched the market and has realistic expectations of where their books falls in the mix.

What makes you pass on a submission most often?

Overwriting.

What are your thoughts on the current market for MG books?

I love how fluid the market is. It’s a chance for writers to dig into themes they may not have explored earlier and stretch their imaginations.

Do you have any events coming up?

For 2025, I’m keeping my calendar quiet to concentrate on my amazing (and very busy) clients.

Where can our MUF readers go to find out more about you?

Website: threeseasagency.com

Bluesky: staceyg.bsky.social

Facebook: facebook.com/agentstaceygraham

Instagram: instagram.com/agentstaceygraham

Threads: @agentstaceygraham

Thank you, Stacey! Cheers to a new year and lots of fart jokes!