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Five Writing Truths We Can Learn from Christmas Carols

 

 2103 Christmas-Snow I have a confession to make: I love Christmas music. In fact, I like it so much that my wife had to institute a family rule—no Christmas music until after Thanksgiving. I eventually got her to compromise, convincing her that Christmas music was allowed before Thanksgiving, as long as it had snowed first. This year, pre-Thanksgiving, I had the stereo pumping “Jingle Bells” as soon as Virginia had its first snowfall.My wife accused me of cheating because we live in the state of Washington.

I say that she never specified the location of the snow.

Anyway, with Christmas now only one week away, I began to wonder what writing wisdom might be gleaned from the music of the season. From the traditional “Away in a Manger” to Elvis’s “Blue Christmas,” here are five Christmas songs and the writing truths they reveal:

1)      “Away in a Manger”: I don’t care if you are reading this while at work in a busy office. Don’t be shy. Go ahead and belt out the opening lines of this Christmas classic. What do you have? Within the first four measures, you already know about the no-crib issue.

If you want to pull in the reader, start with a problem that needs overcome.

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2)      “Rudolph the Red-Nosed Reindeer”: There’s more to be learned from Rudolph than the proper hyphenation of phrasal adjectives*. In fact, the writing truth embedded in the song is as illuminating as Rudolph’s nose:

A single unique trait is often enough to create a memorable character.

3)      “Blue Christmas”: Elvis had snow. He’d finished decorating the Christmas tree. But none of that could pull him from the doldrums of a blue Christmas. He was missing his “Dear.”

Have your protagonist struggle with the loss of something or someone he cares about.

4)      “Christmas Don’t Be Late” as sung by Alvin and the Chipmunks: The squeaky voices of Alvin, Simon, and Theodore get really annoying, really fast. My tolerance of their singing definitely doesn’t extend to listening to the whole song. So . . . when you write, I don’t care if your character is a singing chipmunk or a granny who grew up deep in the mountains of Kentucky.

Don’t overdo dialectical speech in yer dialogue. It’ll get distractin’.

5)      “The Christmas Song” (a.k.a., “Chestnuts Roasting on an Open Fire”): Written on a hot summer day in 1944, “The Christmas Song” went from a few lines penciled in a notebook to a finished song in about 40 minutes. No, you probably won’t crank out a timeless masterpiece in under an hour. But . . .

You never know when the muse might strike.

Sometimes you just need to sit down, start writing, and see what happens.

Now, before you give your muse an opportunity to inspire, take a moment. Pick a Christmas carol. Pause and ponder. Then share with us some holiday-based writing wisdom of your own.

 2103 Christmas-Gift *Note: If you have no idea what a phrasal adjectives is, you may not know why you should never write about a “ten year old boy.” Thus, in the spirit of the season, I offer this ever-so-useful link as my grammatical gift to you: Grammarist: Phrasal adjectives.

 

Making Room for Everyone: Gender Nonconforming and Transgender Characters in Middle Grade Novels

 

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My Princess Boy image courtesy amazon.com

In the 1997 Belgian film Ma Vie En RoseLudovic is a seven year old boy who likes to wear dresses and fancy shoes. He can’t wait to grow up to be a woman and doesn’t understand why those around him are so upset by his gender nonconformity. The film beautifully portrays Ludovic’s story in the context of a family, community, and identity formation. It is not about sexuality persay, but squarely about gender identity.

Although we hear more and more about gender identity in the mainstream press, including legal disputes over children being allowed to use gendered bathrooms in schools, and conversations about whether gender nonconformity in very young children is the same as an expression of trangender identity, are  gender nonconforming and transgender young people represented in Middle Grade Novels? I can think of a number of YA novels with transgender or gender nonconforming characters (check out this list on the great John Green’s tumblr, which includes Luna by Julie Anne Peters and Parrot Fish by Ellen Wittlinger). I can also think of recent picture books including 10,000 Dresses, and My Princess BoyBut what about middle grade novels?

It took me quite a bit of searching, but the best list I found was on Lee Wind’s excellent website, on a post GLBTQ Middle Grade bookshelf. Not all titles were of gender nonconforming characters, but here are some highlights of the ones that appeared to be. Many of these titles are unfamiliar to me, so I’d love any thoughts you have on them, or any other novels featuring gender nonconforming/challenging or transgender characters!

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1. The Boy in the Dress by David Williams: 12 year old Dennis is a star soccer player who likes reading fashion magazines wearing dresses. One day, his new friend Lisa dares him to wear a dress to school.

2. If You Believe in Mermaids, Don’t Tell: 13 year old Todd is the best diver at summer camp. Only thing is, his secret with is to be  mermaid, something he knows he’s not supposed to be.

3. From Alice to Zen and Everything in Between: 11 year old Alice likes playing soccer and working on her go kart. But her new best friend Zen tells her that she needs a makeover to make it in middle school. Only fast-talking, fashion-loving Zen is himself outcast at school for his interests.

4. Wandering Son Book 1 and 2: (Mangas) Fifth graders Shuichi and Yoshino connect during the first days of school, discovering that they share a love of many different things… including the fact that Shuichi is a boy who wants to be a girl, and Yoshino is a girl who wants to be a boy.

Looking forward to your thoughts and recommendations!

 

 

Brotherhood, by A.B. Westrick

Today we’re pleased to welcome author A.B. (Anne Bryan) Westrick to the Mixed-Up Files. Her debut historical middle grade novel, Brotherhood, takes place in 1867 in Richmond, Virginia during the period of Reconstruction. By day, 14-year old Shadrach apprentices with a tailor and sneaks off for reading lessons with Rachel, a freed slave. By night he follows his older brother to the meetings of a brotherhood that supports Confederate widows and grieving families like his. As the true murderous mission of the brotherhood — now known as the Ku Klux Klan — emerges, Shad is trapped between his pledge to them and what he knows is right.

Q: Welcome, A.B.! You first began thinking about the idea for Brotherhood during long walks in Richmond, Virginia, where you live. I love to walk, too! What did you think about and see during your walks, and how did this help shape your novel?

A: I was especially struck by sounds, by sunlight and shadows, and by the views. Richmond is a hilly city, and from some places (like Libby Hill Park), you can see for miles. In one spot, I smelled honeysuckle, and in another, I studied the restored cobblestone streets. One day I heard the chime of church bells, and they led me to imagine the sounds of horses’ hoofs and carriages clattering by. Some of Richmond’s houses were built in the 18th and 19th centuries, and those streets are now historic districts. I lingered in them, taking in the architecture, the alleyways, the slant of the roads and the fragrance of the boxwood bushes. I wondered what it might have felt like to have lived there 150 years ago. Many details from my walks ended up in the book.

indexQ: I love that! So, were you drawn to historical fiction, or did it find you?

A: I didn’t set out to write historical fiction. I love a good story, and set out to write the most compelling story that I could. The history was the setting…the milieu…the time period, not the point of the story.

When I started Brotherhood, I was trying to write about a boy who felt stuck in circumstances beyond his control because that had been my father’s experience as a boy. While growing up in Alabama in the 1930s, he’d seen some things that disturbed him and caused him to vow not to raise his children there. But he wouldn’t talk about it! So I tried to imagine what he, as a young boy, might have seen, and those imaginations took me to the Klan. In 1989, I moved to Richmond, and was struck by the sheer abundance of Civil War museums and monuments. I picked up on lingering resentments directed toward Yankees, and when I asked people about them, their answers went straight to the period of Reconstruction and the way Northerners treated Southerners after “the war of Northern aggression.” So I decided to set the novel then and have my white characters reflect Southern resentments: defeat, grief, anger, etc. So in answer to the question, I guess I’d say that historical fiction found me, and not the other way around.

Q: How could this novel be utilized in a middle school curriculum?

A: Teachers and librarians have made me aware that Brotherhood syncs closely with Virginia’s Standards of Learning, but when I was writing it, I had no idea that would be the case. Reconstruction can be a tough unit to teach because kids have to memorize constitutional amendments that were ratified during that time. It’s a lot of heady, political stuff. Instead of a nonfiction approach to the period, my book helps students imagine what it might have felt like to live in Virginia in 1867. Social Studies teachers are now telling me that if they can get kids to read Brotherhood in their Language Arts classes while they’re learning about Reconstruction in History class, it’ll be a win-win for everybody. Puffin Books has moved up the paperback release date from the fall of 2014 to June 2014, as many librarians have requested the book for summer reading.

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Q: I’m sure you did a ton of research for this novel. Tell us about your research process. Were you well-versed in this time period or did you start from scratch?

A: I knew little about Reconstruction when I started writing, so I read a lot of books and websites, and spent hours in library archives, pouring over newspapers from the period. I also visited every Civil War museum in the Richmond area. What I didn’t have to research, and what came naturally to me, were Southern speech patterns and sensibilities. Although I grew up in the North, both of my parents, all of my ancestors, and most of my cousins are Southern, and from them I absorbed a certain cadence of speech and an appreciation for Southern foods. These subtleties helped me craft the characters.

Q: Was it a challenge to write in the voice of a 14-year old boy who lives in 1867?

A: I’m still trying to figure out why this is, but I have more trouble writing in a girl’s voice than a boy’s. For some reason, boys come alive for me on the page, while girl characters sometimes fall flat. Maybe that will change, but in any case, I felt comfortable writing as a boy, and drafted the whole novel in first person from Shadrach’s point of view. But his grammar was so bad and his dialect so hard to read, I rewrote the manuscript in close-third person. Reading primary source documents like newspapers and books, such as Mary Chestnut’s Civil War helped me imagine the orientation of and issues important to people who’d lived in 1867.

Q: You’re a debut author. Tell us what it was like when you found out your book would be published.

A: I’d been writing fiction for over a decade at that point, and had received so many rejection letters from agents and editors, that when word came on a contract, I almost didn’t believe it. I went around in a daze. I was thrilled. But I also remember feeling cautious, as if maybe it wasn’t really happening, and I’d just dreamed it. What a wonderful dream to have!

Q: You’ve been a teacher, paralegal, and a literacy volunteer. What drew you to writing for middle graders?

A: I love the energy of middle grade readers. I like their sometimes irreverent view of the status quo, and especially the way they question authority. I enjoy choosing issues that interest me as an adult, then writing about them from the point of view of a thirteen, fourteen, or fifteen-year old. Writing for young readers and thinking through issues from their point of view makes me a better adult.

Q: Tell us some fun facts about yourself. What’s your favorite dessert? Do you like to be called A.B. or Anne? On a Sunday afternoon, where would we find you?

A: Oooohhh…dessert… Well, of course, dark chocolate. But the caffeine in chocolate keeps me awake at night, so I have to eat it in the morning. Just have to. Afternoons and evenings: cheesecake or pumpkin pie.

I like to be called Anne. One of my boys was a reluctant reader who’d avoid books with female authors (he looked for any excuse to avoid books) so I decided to publish as A.B. for gender-neutrality. I didn’t want my feminine name to be a barrier to a reader. On Sunday afternoons, I’ll often read the newspaper or fiction, and go to a yoga class that’s super chill. It’s not aerobic power-yoga, but all about stress-release, balancing, centering, breathing, stretching, and strengthening. After that class, walking feels like floating.

Thanks so much, Anne, for visiting today!

Anne is generously giving away one copy of Brotherhood. If you’d like to be entered in the drawing for the book, please use the Rafflecopter form below! We will choose one random winner. Please note that you must live in the U.S. or Canada to enter the giveaway. Check out Anne’s website here.

Michele Weber Hurwitz, a tried and true Northerner, can be found at micheleweberhurwitz.com.

 

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